WK 10: DMS 3-0 vs. Incredible 2-3 - INCREDIBLE WINS
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due FRIDAY JULY 20th! and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Edit Rules:

• 1st Person can edit until his opponent drops
• 2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER INCREDIBLE

@DMS @Incredible

Check 10-14

Cereal not voting would be appreciated

8 I guess

You’re as soft as pasta, when I play on ya I’m smart still
There’s so much the GAT lays on ya, it’s like this cat was Garfield
I open up this kid’s door quietly, I ‘gain energy’ from this foster’s scream
My crew role up ‘canisters’ filled, get ready cus we’re ‘Monsters Inc’
Ain’t gonna Mark chalk o’ let the police find him, this is pure malice
This marshmallow hasn’t seen a gram in his life, why do you think he has s’more talent.
Your girl a cheese head? I’ve been hearing that Inc, Ay.
Cus she’s yelling at you to ‘Go Pack!’ Like she was cheering at Green Bay

Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin
& After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin
That'll be with me barely speakin, them dogs bark on there own
Youd think they walking some pets looking for you, that's the nose of the chrome
Boy go home, stop skippin class to post up a verse from the library
No book on how to shoot, he trippin? Turn'em to braille this kid is clearly blind, very!
Me: Why so angry sometimes? DQ'n Bongo? Not letting votes come out?
Him: "Just built up aggression from losing over n' over to him & Lenox on my Kik acct."

Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin
& After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin

Lol...that won it for me, both were tight verses but yeah...

Vote - Inc.

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You’re as soft as pasta, when I play on ya I’m smart still
There’s so much the GAT lays on ya, it’s like this cat was Garfield
ehh...so much "missing something here maybe" the gat
I open up this kid’s door quietly, I ‘gain energy’ from this foster’s scream
My crew role up ‘canisters’ filled, get ready cus we’re ‘Monsters Inc’
this wasn't bad but could've been a lot better
Ain’t gonna Mark chalk o’ let the police find him, this is pure malice
This marshmallow hasn’t seen a gram in his life, why do you think he has s’more talent.
nah, "need s'more talent" or something, dunno what the Mark part references
Your girl a cheese head? I’ve been hearing that Inc, Ay.
Cus she’s yelling at you to ‘Go Pack!’ Like she was cheering at Green Bay
closer wasn't bad, set-up was lackluster


Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin
& After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin
coolish flip kinda
That'll be with me barely speakin, them dogs bark on there own
Youd think they walking some pets looking for you, that's the nose of the chrome
cool again
Boy go home, stop skippin class to post up a verse from the library
No book on how to shoot, he trippin? Turn'em to braille this kid is clearly blind, very!
nah
Me: Why so angry sometimes? DQ'n Bongo? Not letting votes come out?
Him: "Just built up aggression from losing over n' over to him & Lenox on my Kik acct."
funny line

I got Inc here with a better overall verse, good battle fellas.

You’re as soft as pasta, when I play on ya I’m smart still
There’s so much the GAT lays on ya, it’s like this cat was Garfield

Very light here fam...decent

I open up this kid’s door quietly, I ‘gain energy’ from this foster’s scream
My crew role up ‘canisters’ filled, get ready cus we’re ‘Monsters Inc’

Concept was coo, but the execution to the punch was light. Weak jab here

Ain’t gonna Mark chalk o’ let the police find him, this is pure malice
This marshmallow hasn’t seen a gram in his life, why do you think he has s’more talent.

Nahhh b, wasn't to much rocking with this one

Your girl a cheese head? I’ve been hearing that Inc, Ay.
Cus she’s yelling at you to ‘Go Pack!’ Like she was cheering at Green Bay

This was decent here, best line out of your verse to me.....

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Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin
& After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin

Coo opener here! Wording is stretched as you read

That'll be with me barely speakin, them dogs bark on there own
Youd think they walking some pets looking for you, that's the nose of the chrome

Light jab here, decent concept I guess

Boy go home, stop skippin class to post up a verse from the library
No book on how to shoot, he trippin? Turn'em to braille this kid is clearly blind, very!

Lol, funny jab here, it was decent

Me: Why so angry sometimes? DQ'n Bongo? Not letting votes come out?
Him: "Just built up aggression from losing over n' over to him & Lenox on my Kik acct."


Funny closer here!



Props to both! No brainer here Inc gets this with better overall verse all the way around. DMS needs some work in some areas, but its all good keep at it homie.

1HunDo


V-Inc

You’re as soft as pasta, when I play on ya I’m smart still
There’s so much the GAT lays on ya, it’s like this cat was Garfield
had potential
I open up this kid’s door quietly, I ‘gain energy’ from this foster’s scream
My crew role up ‘canisters’ filled, get ready cus we’re ‘Monsters Inc’
I personally thought this was dope, I see how it could be better w/ a little more finesse but I like it
Ain’t gonna Mark chalk o’ let the police find him, this is pure malice
This marshmallow hasn’t seen a gram in his life, why do you think he has s’more talent.
hmm, didn't catch the connection here. From the setup I thought u were going to go a different direction
Your girl a cheese head? I’ve been hearing that Inc, Ay.
Cus she’s yelling at you to ‘Go Pack!’ Like she was cheering at Green Bay
ya, this was coo

Undeafeted...Pft for what reason? this inc leave you bleedin
& After I put this $$$ tattoo on ya head, the DQ is only what my killers are seekin
lol ok
That'll be with me barely speakin, them dogs bark on there own
Youd think they walking some pets looking for you, that's the nose of the chrome
fks w/ it
Boy go home, stop skippin class to post up a verse from the library
No book on how to shoot, he trippin? Turn'em to braille this kid is clearly blind, very!
lol, not feeling this one, LMAO blind, VERY! haha.. it made me laugh
Me: Why so angry sometimes? DQ'n Bongo? Not letting votes come out?
Him: "Just built up aggression from losing over n' over to him & Lenox on my Kik acct."
ya, nice

Hmm... I thought it was closer than people think. Thought DMS actually had the lotb w/ the monsters inc line, guess it's just preference. Incred def had the more consistent verse w/ a couple jabs and some funny lines. Edge to incred, excited to see what DMS does in the future.

v/ Incred