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07-03-2018, 12:40 AM
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Oh you deleted it?
Well, from what I remember there were things I liked and disliked. I very much liked the short lines and some of the good rhyming. I didn't like a few phrases that were stretches. And just in general some poorer wording. I don't have examples right now because it's deleted. It was okay you could put it back up. |
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