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Shanghai Noon
Eh
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You already posted this here I think?
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Kinda, but not really. I posted it. Then edited and deleted it before anybody actually read it.
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Oh you deleted it?
Well, from what I remember there were things I liked and disliked. I very much liked the short lines and some of the good rhyming. I didn't like a few phrases that were stretches. And just in general some poorer wording. I don't have examples right now because it's deleted. It was okay you could put it back up. |
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