R!canTheoryz vs. megatron {R!canTheoryz wins}

Maximus · 05-31-2013, 04:20 PM

Rican- opener was decent enuff, didnt like the transformer movie line much, thought it coulda been flipped better but the weak wording made it basic, hard thoughts falling was a cool concept but poorly worded and stretched which made the impact less, same with the megaphone line and ur closer was ok.
Megatron- what happened bro, seen u dropped way better than this man, ur verse was pretty weak. The opener was blah, same with ur 2nd,3rd and 4th lines, they all did no damage, ur last bar was the only bar that was a lil decent imo...
V/rican

05-31-2013, 04:20 PM	#7
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	Rican- opener was decent enuff, didnt like the transformer movie line much, thought it coulda been flipped better but the weak wording made it basic, hard thoughts falling was a cool concept but poorly worded and stretched which made the impact less, same with the megaphone line and ur closer was ok. Megatron- what happened bro, seen u dropped way better than this man, ur verse was pretty weak. The opener was blah, same with ur 2nd,3rd and 4th lines, they all did no damage, ur last bar was the only bar that was a lil decent imo... V/rican