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Old 03-24-2018, 12:53 AM   #1
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Hi my name is Michael Myers
Call...and watch me Spark the Fires
Sick and tired of these Average Writers
I head to the basement get the Hatchet and Wires
To Strangle Insiders and drink their blood like it's that Apple Cider
Splatter ya balls and have it Hacked with the Pliers
Bash your Cranium with a Scepter of Titanium
To view your internals like the Center of a Stadium
Am also tempted by Demonic Spirits
That enter my mind and Convert into Lyrics
Communicate with Ghost of Mommy
Due to the Force that is Godly
Broad and Am Brolly cracking the Bones in you Body
Have you Broken Badly and leave your Corpse in the Lobby
Walk away... like its just Another Day
Leave your pet dead where ya Brother Lay
Before you enter the Layer better Stop and Pray
That you haven't been...Stalked like Prey
By the Monster in Darkness Slaughtering Heartless
Tear Hands and Rip Legs
Blood smear in glands when A Slit Necks
Keeping an Eye on All
Take a deep breaths when a Rival Fall
There is no escape in the Ring a twisted Dark Scout
Swiping a blade causing everything inside your ribs Fall Out
Walk in and out of the Hellish Abyss
The Rebel Adrift with a Devilish Hiss
Thinking Pure death... what kinda Level is This?
Trynna block the Urge that Steady Persist
Slashing your Neck and then am Cashing a Check
Tranced in the Set Leave you Dismantled in Wreck
With a jagged knife Jammed in the Chest
You can tell that Am Damned like the Rest
Feasting on human Parts in the Nest
Abe Making a call... to Jason and Hannibal
That be the Eating hearts with the Rage of a Cannibal
The Beast Is Coming, The sickest Apocalypse Forming
Catastrophic N Storming Monsterously Plundering
Demons empowering Chakras when Remorsefully Bludgeoning
Meditating in silent living Under a Dungeon
Assassinate a defiant have him Cut like a Surgeon
Abomination unravel and now Walking the Earth
Leave a pagan trampled and Mangled in Dirt
Smashing your dome and Popping ya Nerve
Then Dragging A carcass to have it Stashed in a Curve
The Masochist is here to Slash your Wrist
With the sharpest of knife held in a Giant Fist
A Monster Walking and Suddenly Gashing
Cursed by a Spell he is Immortal as Well
Tie you with chains in the Circle of Hell
Then Haul you around till you Purple and Swell
Throw you in the creek till you Bloated O Well
Am Cracking your Spine just for Crossing the Line
Stitch your lips with a Roll of Wire
Have it stripped to Bits and then Toss you Fire
in this gloomy cove you can Call me the Sire
The Savage Phantom that is Alive in your Dreams
Ravage your Sanctum while you Dieing and Scream
I Keep Hacking the Scene Behind Am Unseen
Young and Timid with no Love for the Wicked
Now it is Scripted from the ground A be Lifted
Levitating at night so you Know A be Gifted
From your dimension Paranormally Shifted
I leave the yard and Walk the Streets
Wondering if Hades got Mia Treats
Disappeared from the Archives
Nail your dead body to a wall with Sharp Knives
Am here to Shock Lives, Subtly I Crouch
To assassinate a couple for Fucking in the Couch
Schooled by Will I need a Bully to Kill
Push a spiked dagger Through his Grill
Then the professy will be Truly Fulfill
Faith is Unlook they Entombing me Still
So Come take a look at the Tomb where I Chill
Mad and Rabid, Attacking, Hacking Rapid
Shuv a blade in your throat as you Gargling Acid
On this day... you will be Meetin your Fears
Am the one who will be... Eating your Ears
Rip your Skin with the Sheers laugh as your Dick Tears
Watch the mask the Grin it is Clear
Body goes numb and cold when the Kill is Near
Untouchable Am Sealed in a Sphere
Born to Trend am the Coldest of Friend
The one that will be Recording your End
Don't Come to Pretend in the place where A Curse was Planted
Now Am the ghost who remains in this abandoned Abode that is Haunted
Between dimensions and different plains is where the Soul is Stranted
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Old 03-24-2018, 02:01 AM   #2
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i like your stuff man its a good style occult horrorcore the word plays on point
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Old 03-24-2018, 04:06 AM   #3
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Old 03-24-2018, 10:45 AM   #4
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Don't know why but this made me for real Lol.
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Old 03-24-2018, 10:56 AM   #5
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Not really my cup of tea. Reminds me of some Brother Lynch Hung raps, but I'm not a huge fan of Horrorcore. But for it was it was pretty good. It's just that all the violence gets a little repetitive after a while. But I guess excess was the objective. You have a sick and twist mind, fam. I'd hate to be on your bad side. I'm all for boxing and shooting it out. But you seem like the type to cook someone's head in a microwave lol. Keep em coming, man. Peace.
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Old 03-24-2018, 11:20 AM   #6
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Am the goat and you are the sheep
I awaken your soul trying to sleep
Lick the tears that roll down your cheek
And poke the Bloated bodies floating in creek
Curses I leak
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Old 03-24-2018, 01:03 PM   #7
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Curses you leak?

Alright then.
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Old 03-25-2018, 09:00 AM   #8
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Couple LolS that made this worth reading lmao

Am here to Shock Lives, Subtly I Crouch
To assassinate a couple for Fucking in the Couch

Am the one who will be... Eating your Ears
Rip your Skin with the Sheers laugh as your Dick tears
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Old 03-25-2018, 11:22 AM   #9
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This is awful and I hold this subgenre near and queer to my heart.
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Old 04-01-2018, 12:37 AM   #10
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I don't see this being awful. Seems like a typical piece I'd keystyle just to let the demons out to play. Nice use of your imagery for your horrorcore element. Multis we're pretty dope and some cool puns in there. Maybe we can do a text collab on some horrorcore shit. If interested PM me
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