Rusty Rambling

BodySnatcher · 03-21-2018, 04:22 PM

Something quick.

Family feuds...
With a food fight appetite for quaaludes
Paid dues, re-up then made moves
Gave clues...
On how to moonwalk in suede shoes
They use my shoeprint as a blueprint
But my two cents is too tense
I smell like a nuisance with new scents
Turn my two cents into a few cents
By speaking nonsense or not sense
In an odd sense its been odd since
I been feelin froggy like John Spence
If you don’t understand the contents
Look it up before you leave comments

Been a long while. That was fun.

Elemental P · 03-21-2018, 06:44 PM

Had a cool rhyme scheme going. Don't wtf it was talking bout but w.e. pretty sure and I'm guessing just some warm up bars to get in it again so stay at it

BodySnatcher · 03-21-2018, 06:52 PM

Just playing with words like scrabble.
It has no meaning.

ACTIVATE SELF · 03-22-2018, 02:45 AM

Yep, no clue what any of this means, but I dug it nonetheless. Cool little exercise showcasing some lyrical dexterity. It maybe nonsensical, but it was not unentertaining. Keep at it, Snatch.

CopyPat · 04-01-2018, 12:34 PM

something like this is better off and perfect for the cypher thread.
would like to see what you can actually do if you put in some time or effort into a complete piece

03-21-2018, 04:22 PM	#1
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840896	Rusty Rambling Something quick. Family feuds... With a food fight appetite for quaaludes Paid dues, re-up then made moves Gave clues... On how to moonwalk in suede shoes They use my shoeprint as a blueprint But my two cents is too tense I smell like a nuisance with new scents Turn my two cents into a few cents By speaking nonsense or not sense In an odd sense its been odd since I been feelin froggy like John Spence If you don’t understand the contents Look it up before you leave comments Been a long while. That was fun.

04-01-2018, 12:34 PM	#5
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742222	something like this is better off and perfect for the cypher thread. would like to see what you can actually do if you put in some time or effort into a complete piece __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

03-21-2018, 06:44 PM	#2
Elemental P Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 856 Rep Power: 4507453	Had a cool rhyme scheme going. Don't wtf it was talking bout but w.e. pretty sure and I'm guessing just some warm up bars to get in it again so stay at it

03-21-2018, 06:52 PM	#3
BodySnatcher Hail Mary Haymakers Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: You know where I be at Posts: 1,785 Battle Record: 17-7 Champed - BAL Roast - Battle Arena League - BAL Season Champ Rep Power: 3840896	Just playing with words like scrabble. It has no meaning.

03-22-2018, 02:45 AM	#4
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	Yep, no clue what any of this means, but I dug it nonetheless. Cool little exercise showcasing some lyrical dexterity. It maybe nonsensical, but it was not unentertaining. Keep at it, Snatch.