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BodySnatcher 03-21-2018 04:22 PM

Rusty Rambling
 
Something quick.


Family feuds...
With a food fight appetite for quaaludes
Paid dues, re-up then made moves
Gave clues...
On how to moonwalk in suede shoes
They use my shoeprint as a blueprint
But my two cents is too tense
I smell like a nuisance with new scents
Turn my two cents into a few cents
By speaking nonsense or not sense
In an odd sense its been odd since
I been feelin froggy like John Spence
If you don’t understand the contents
Look it up before you leave comments

Been a long while. That was fun.

Elemental P 03-21-2018 06:44 PM

Had a cool rhyme scheme going. Don't wtf it was talking bout but w.e. pretty sure and I'm guessing just some warm up bars to get in it again so stay at it

BodySnatcher 03-21-2018 06:52 PM

Just playing with words like scrabble.
It has no meaning.

ACTIVATE SELF 03-22-2018 02:45 AM

Yep, no clue what any of this means, but I dug it nonetheless. Cool little exercise showcasing some lyrical dexterity. It maybe nonsensical, but it was not unentertaining. Keep at it, Snatch.

CopyPat 04-01-2018 12:34 PM

something like this is better off and perfect for the cypher thread.
would like to see what you can actually do if you put in some time or effort into a complete piece


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