BA Rookie Tourney Semi Finals: bleak vs Jay Welsh - JAY WELSH WINS

Suthaveli · 02-28-2018, 09:41 AM

Last night he sent baron a pic of his ex, but they never had sex!
Blood rushin to his face cus she gave him the boot, thats american history x
You need every gun mod goin if the blastin is happenin
I dont need help hurtin faggots, thats why the AK demodded For Battling

the swerve line could've been sooooooooo dope. it was good, but where i thought it was going, it didn't go. which isn't a bad thing cause i luv lines that take me left instead of right to the obv. but manipulating the wordin on how u executed it would of made it much more vicious imo. the wording on ur verse was pretty clean all the way thru tho. gd shit.

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Ur tag on my wishlist? radical Christians will hang yo faction.
Facts are as follows: Welsh conquered by acts of God like the Anglo-Saxons
I'm strapped to the teeth w/rockets, bombs... blasting this geek.
Head shots=jaw so dislocated, you'd think rockets was strapped to the teeth.

ok. so first of all... THAT ROCKET STRAPPED TO THE TEETH LINE WAS SO.FUCKIN.SICK. lol. gd shit on that. when i read that, i actually reacted out loud w. the ouiiiiiiiiiii face. Second, reading u reminds me of me in the event of taking chances w.lines. u never know what u will get. but times w.that you can become so creative &weird it doesn't come of as great as when we thought of it & come across choppy, wordy, etc. u did have that in ur verse a few times.

you guys didn't let down. this was a nice read imo. both had a powerful quote but Bleak had lotb w. the rocket teeth joint. Welsh had an all together better verse straight up & down. other than a old punch or 2, his joint came across much cleaner.
Jay Welsh can an immediate threat. just needs learns whats not played, because his wording is together its jus his material is a bit dated. @bleak will be an future threat when he gets fully where he wants to on how he wants to form set ups. don't lose ur creativity, just allow it to work for u & what ur focus on. case in point, pretty much insulting & calling someone a slur ghey word 1,000x in different ways.

gd read guys, ty.

mvgt- @Jay Welsh

02-28-2018, 09:41 AM	#1
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534023	Last night he sent baron a pic of his ex, but they never had sex! Blood rushin to his face cus she gave him the boot, thats american history x You need every gun mod goin if the blastin is happenin I dont need help hurtin faggots, thats why the AK demodded For Battling the swerve line could've been sooooooooo dope. it was good, but where i thought it was going, it didn't go. which isn't a bad thing cause i luv lines that take me left instead of right to the obv. but manipulating the wordin on how u executed it would of made it much more vicious imo. the wording on ur verse was pretty clean all the way thru tho. gd shit. vs Ur tag on my wishlist? radical Christians will hang yo faction. Facts are as follows: Welsh conquered by acts of God like the Anglo-Saxons I'm strapped to the teeth w/rockets, bombs... blasting this geek. Head shots=jaw so dislocated, you'd think rockets was strapped to the teeth. ok. so first of all... THAT ROCKET STRAPPED TO THE TEETH LINE WAS SO.FUCKIN.SICK. lol. gd shit on that. when i read that, i actually reacted out loud w. the ouiiiiiiiiiii face. Second, reading u reminds me of me in the event of taking chances w.lines. u never know what u will get. but times w.that you can become so creative &weird it doesn't come of as great as when we thought of it & come across choppy, wordy, etc. u did have that in ur verse a few times. you guys didn't let down. this was a nice read imo. both had a powerful quote but Bleak had lotb w. the rocket teeth joint. Welsh had an all together better verse straight up & down. other than a old punch or 2, his joint came across much cleaner. Jay Welsh can an immediate threat. just needs learns whats not played, because his wording is together its jus his material is a bit dated. @bleak will be an future threat when he gets fully where he wants to on how he wants to form set ups. don't lose ur creativity, just allow it to work for u & what ur focus on. case in point, pretty much insulting & calling someone a slur ghey word 1,000x in different ways. gd read guys, ty. mvgt- @Jay Welsh Last edited by Suthaveli; 02-28-2018 at 09:57 AM.