BA Rookie Tourney Semi Finals: bleak vs Jay Welsh - JAY WELSH WINS
 

BA Rookie Tourney Semi Finals:

Rules

Due Dates:
Verses are due Sunday Feb 25th and will be open until voting is done
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:
Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

Options: Standard, Pic Roast, Swag&Flow, 1-2 Punch rebuttal, Gimmick etc

@bleak vs @Jay Welsh

@Jay Welsh 14 to Inf

See where ee at tomorrow. Top man respect

@bleak @infiltration

14 done


Bleak aka the guy who does compliment battles aka a hill climbing canadian faggot

You Candian fuck! Your a vet in a nooby tourny whos losin this fight
As if he climbs mountains, the bitch cant even reach the peaks of this site
Last night he sent baron a pic of his ex, but they never had sex!
Blood rushin to his face cus she gave him the boot, thats american history x
Dont test me, Im a handy man, the sort to put the locks in
An if i see U Bend its cus im about to work the 'tap in'
I dodge bullets, you dodge real rap where the aims to hit back
I body swerve a blast to the face, your body just cant wait to serve swerve that
Im breathin fire from my lungs whilst embers got him coughin..
A artist? Please, ill cloud him in smoke an he aint 'draw in' nothing
You need every gun mod goin if the blastin is happenin
I dont need help hurtin faggots, thats why the AK demodded For Battling
Baron reviewed him as too nice, so no wonder i jus ate you alive
I said lets throw hands... N this faggot gave me a crisp high five

FloFlo my guy, I basically raised you don't forget that

My lions trained on you. Ur clownin if ur talking your team hurts us
If they smell meat: in a compact 12 deep. turn that Audi to a 4 ring circus
Ur tag on my wishlist? radical Christians will hang yo faction.
Facts are as follows: Welsh conquered by acts of God like the Anglo-Saxons
also know some Samoan twins, holdin weight... + the glock's heavy
Leave it to these 2 who breathing to eat food, call em Bebop &Rocksteady
Ur girl's the bi type, my bitch high &tight as she greets them 2 lips
Flo's hoe curved a certain way in the air while she catches my Sweet Chin Music
I'm strapped to the teeth w/rockets, bombs... blasting this geek.
Head shots=jaw so dislocated, you'd think rockets was strapped to the teeth.
The screams ur hearing of NO ain't worth the fuss, kid.
I ignore your misanthropy til she won't show herself in public.
steel will spray. drop his body in the water, he's merk'd w/ a choppa...
In other words:
kneel &pray. then watch As a llama lake him w/o the mercy of Allah.

You Candian fuck! Your a vet in a nooby tourny whos losin this fight
As if he climbs mountains, the bitch cant even reach the peaks of this site
Last night he sent baron a pic of his ex, but they never had sex!
Blood rushin to his face cus she gave him the boot, thats american history x
You need every gun mod goin if the blastin is happenin
I dont need help hurtin faggots, thats why the AK demodded For Battlingfat wife

vs

Ur tag on my wishlist? radical Christians will hang yo faction.
Facts are as follows: Welsh conquered by acts of God like the Anglo-Saxons
I'm strapped to the teeth w/rockets, bombs... blasting this geek.
Head shots=jaw so dislocated, you'd think rockets was strapped to the teeth.

good battle here rs. flo keeps improvin wit every verse I read. bleak brought it too tho.. prolly the best verse ive read from ya since ive been back. that rockets to ur teeth ish was brutal. evn tho I think bleak had lotb flo had a quote more n overall I think he edged this one.. votes' ll prolly be close.

vote - flo

see yall in the finals

versus

VOTE FLO REAL I perfer Bleak's creative concepts, but Jay's wording is waaay cleaner & harsher, that what makes the punches land effectively.

Last night he sent baron a pic of his ex, but they never had sex!
Blood rushin to his face cus she gave him the boot, thats american history x
You need every gun mod goin if the blastin is happenin
I dont need help hurtin faggots, thats why the AK demodded For Battling

the swerve line could've been sooooooooo dope. it was good, but where i thought it was going, it didn't go. which isn't a bad thing cause i luv lines that take me left instead of right to the obv. but manipulating the wordin on how u executed it would of made it much more vicious imo. the wording on ur verse was pretty clean all the way thru tho. gd shit.

vs

Ur tag on my wishlist? radical Christians will hang yo faction.
Facts are as follows: Welsh conquered by acts of God like the Anglo-Saxons
I'm strapped to the teeth w/rockets, bombs... blasting this geek.
Head shots=jaw so dislocated, you'd think rockets was strapped to the teeth.

ok. so first of all... THAT ROCKET STRAPPED TO THE TEETH LINE WAS SO.FUCKIN.SICK. lol. gd shit on that. when i read that, i actually reacted out loud w. the ouiiiiiiiiiii face. Second, reading u reminds me of me in the event of taking chances w.lines. u never know what u will get. but times w.that you can become so creative &weird it doesn't come of as great as when we thought of it & come across choppy, wordy, etc. u did have that in ur verse a few times.

you guys didn't let down. this was a nice read imo. both had a powerful quote but Bleak had lotb w. the rocket teeth joint. Welsh had an all together better verse straight up & down. other than a old punch or 2, his joint came across much cleaner.
Jay Welsh can an immediate threat. just needs learns whats not played, because his wording is together its jus his material is a bit dated. @bleak will be an future threat when he gets fully where he wants to on how he wants to form set ups. don't lose ur creativity, just allow it to work for u & what ur focus on. case in point, pretty much insulting & calling someone a slur ghey word 1,000x in different ways.

gd read guys, ty.

mvgt- @Jay Welsh

Jay Welsh:

You Candian fuck! Your a vet in a nooby tourny whos losin this fight
As if he climbs mountains, the bitch cant even reach the peaks of this site

Im breathin fire from my lungs whilst embers got him coughin..
A artist? Please, ill cloud him in smoke an he aint 'draw in' nothing

Baron reviewed him as too nice, so no wonder i jus ate you alive
I said lets throw hands... N this faggot gave me a crisp high five

bleak:

My lions trained on you. Ur clownin if ur talking your team hurts us
If they smell meat: in a compact 12 deep. turn that Audi to a 4 ring circus

Ur tag on my wishlist? radical Christians will hang yo faction.
Facts are as follows: Welsh conquered by acts of God like the Anglo-Saxons


The above bars are my favorites, not saying the other ones sucked. Either way this was a good read, sorry I took so long to vote, where's the other people at that were in this tournament?

Overall good verse from both in my opinion, both had nice flow and were easy to read. I do feel like Jay got this one though, I actually lol'd at the peak of the site line. So props to both for a good showing but I got Jay Welsh for the better of the two.

Congrats. Will leave open for feed. Mag will be up.

Bit hopeful that think we surprised us all with the amount of votes we got. Nice showing @bleak