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Old 02-09-2018, 04:16 PM   #11
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From start to finish - I've been rippin all contenders/
But it seems the problem isn't all this talent I was given/
I'm just a fuckin sinner - Lord, you listenin i'll admit it/
A couple bad bitches n some swishers it's official/

nothing here. you've not ripped any contenders. even as a braggadocios line this is so painfully vanilla its upsetting. next couplet is random because the first line doesn't indicate there is an actual problem that ud be pondering here to the point where u literally take your wrong doings on earth in the eyes of god into consideration? I guess the fact that youre unsuccessful in this hobby and its well known is the implied problem here but that completely contradicts your opening line about "rippin all contenders" ... and then you follow up with more filler garbage about sexy women and weed which is completely random, uncreative and disingenuous to your life....well....the sexy women part anyways.




Don't know what they told you - never did what I'z sposed to/
recommend you don't offend him by pretendin you know sumn/
Better for us both you just left him alone/
Any second he could blow, I'm just lettin you know/

I'z!??! never did what I/z ssposed to!? fucking plantation slang ?~? jesus Christ. the rest of this is just a testament to the façade of an inflated street hungry tough guy persona of yourself that only exists in your mind and has never manifested itself in reality.

All my family hold me down - never beg for a meal/
Finny leave ya bitch fiendin like I'm needin a deal/
Finna leave ya bitch leakin like ya D on Shaquille/
Finna break even steven when I spray somethin ill/

this is the spiritual lyrical masterpiece u in here saying is your best work to date!? absolutely horrible. ur an ugly fat lumpy headed dirtbag youre not doing shit with any1s bitch.....and even if u were...HOW IS THIS SO FUCKING GROUNDBREAKING COMPARED TO 90% OF WHATS TRENDING INT HE INDUSTRY.....WHERE DOES HE COME UP WITH THIS INCREDIBLE IDEAS??!? IVE NEVER SEEN THEM>!?

shaq reference in 2018 ok sure ...that seems sensible


ends with you spraying something ill....watchout guys we have a lyrical magnum opus on our hands here

Later on I'll prolly visit ya mama/
Got a thang for the drama - need a new kink in my armour/
It don't matter what you call him - Mad Hatter with a callin/
Big baller wit the column - Index flush with the product/

this whole set is some ghostface killah shit if he was autistic


Y'all faggots act like bitches
Man I just don't get it
And I don't fuck wit it

Finny BEEN a soldier, what's a pawn to a General?/
Y'all can get off of my genitals, I should stop cuz you miserable?!/
Y'all some bitches on a mission, you convinced you could fuck with me/
The reasons ain't obvious then you probably one of them/

the pawn is a soldier...which you have reversed as something you are...then u claim that the pawn is worthless compared to the general....implying youre now the general LMAO...idiot shit here...plus youre not a soldier or General in any sense of either meaning for absolute certain fact........... last couplet doesn't even rhyme and the broken fucking English on this isn't even as offputting as the completely incorrect use of the colloquialism that you ended the scheme in.


Don't you EVER disrespect me Imma make you my bitch/
Slap you in the fuckin mouth if you ain't feelin my shit!/
I came to knock'em out - Mama told me I should/
Hall of famer to the booth - J wetter than Truth like...
How you want it, you can get it anytime/
Like ya baby mother told me when I hit it from behind/

where is the substance man. literally where>? more brag shit about how ur the best and one of the most painfully fucking simple similes ive had the displeasure of reading in years upon years. an again this strange sex icon image you've deluded yourself into believing when in reality you've openly confessed to how dismal your sex life and affairs with women in general typically are. really that wouldn't even be that much of an issue if you were pushing this ideas in a clever way or with complex rhyme structures but youre not even managing that AND on top of that transgression you are sitting as an open critic attacking successful mainstream artists for having simple styles that utterly and completely still annihilate this lazy dogshit.


She be callin, I don't answer - she be blowin up my phone/
If I pay her no attention she gonna have to let me go/
So... listen here, it's time to say good-bye/
Don't got the time or the patience to fuckin care if you cry/
Or even care if you die - What if it was me n no lies!/
I promise Imma see you, but I'm leavin cuz uhhhh


nursery fucking rhymes. OK MY RAPS DONE OKEY DOKEY ITS BEEN FUN...DID I MENTION A GUN>? OR THAT I GET LOTS OF BUNS? HICKORY DICKORY DOO DAH...TRIPPLE PLATINUM BOOYAH


uhhh worst ever.


Y'all faggots act like bitches
Man I just don't get it
And I don't fuck wit it






so don't fucking sit here and say OK WELL THE RECORDING SUCKED....MY DELIVERY SUCKED BUT ...THIS WAS A LYRICAL MASTERPIECE......cuz it was anything but. this was the worst thing ive read in years....and I read all of the old open mics that infiltration posts in our archives from 2003 written by 14yr old wiggers and even that horrible horrible shit outshines this like a solar eclipse.

theres nothing here. you didn't say anything of value, merit, truth. you completely lacked creativity and or any sort of innovations or new approaches conceptually.

you are everything that hip hop doesn't need. miss me w ur self proclamations of talent and god awful attempts at music u fucking loser.
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