Netcees - "Estrogen" (Bitches). NETCEES DISS!!! - 2nd attempt at tribute album.

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"Estrogen" (Bitches). NETCEES DISS!!! - 2nd attempt at tribute album.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QMwhV7xJMrQ

LMFAO @ me fuckin up the first chorus.

Beat:

https://soundcloud.com/isaac-meyer-3/fincredible

Since y'all like text:

Quote:

From start to finish - I've been rippin all contenders/
But it seems the problem isn't all this talent I was given/
I'm just a fuckin sinner - Lord, you listenin i'll admit it/
A couple bad bitches n some swishers it's official/
Don't know what they told you - never did what I'z sposed to/
recommend you don't offend him by pretendin you know sumn/
Better for us both you just left him alone/
Any second he could blow, I'm just lettin you know/
All my family hold me down - never beg for a meal/
Finny leave ya bitch fiendin like I'm needin a deal/
Finna leave ya bitch leakin like ya D on Shaquille/
Finna break even steven when I spray somethin ill/
Later on I'll prolly visit ya mama/
Got a thang for the drama - need a new kink in my armour/
It don't matter what you call him - Mad Hatter with a callin/
Big baller wit the column - Index flush with the product/

Y'all faggots act like bitches
Man I just don't get it
And I don't fuck wit it

Finny BEEN a soldier, what's a pawn to a General?/
Y'all can get off of my genitals, I should stop cuz you miserable?!/
Y'all some bitches on a mission, you convinced you could fuck with me/
The reasons ain't obvious then you probably one of them/
Don't you EVER disrespect me Imma make you my bitch/
Slap you in the fuckin mouth if you ain't feelin my shit!/
I came to knock'em out - Mama told me I should/
Hall of famer to the booth - J wetter than Truth like...
How you want it, you can get it anytime/
Like ya baby mother told me when I hit it from behind/
She be callin, I don't answer - she be blowin up my phone/
If I pay her no attention she gonna have to let me go/
So... listen here, it's time to say good-bye/
Don't got the time or the patience to fuckin care if you cry/
Or even care if you die - What if it was me n no lies!/
I promise Imma see you, but I'm leavin cuz uhhhh

Y'all faggots act like bitches
Man I just don't get it
And I don't fuck wit it

u need a ghostwriter

shit mite be dope if u was sayin somethin fresh

Smh...no name dropping?

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Originally Posted by Unemployed (Post 641049)

u need a ghostwriter

shit mite be dope if u was sayin somethin fresh

I turned a sappy love song into a track about how mother fuckers acting like bitches. Lol foh

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Originally Posted by Chill Phil (Post 641050)

Smh...no name dropping?

Very blanket statement type diss track. If I were to actually name drop them I couldn't record this and use it for the EP.

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Originally Posted by Infinity Tha rellik (Post 641070)

I turned a sappy love song into a track about how mother fuckers acting like bitches. Lol foh

The concept has been done before, I'll give you that. Bitch niggaz by Dre, then Girls by Eminem. But I doubt anyone has sampled THIS artist and made THIS kind of song.

I'm not just a rapper, I don't focus on being the best lyricist ever like you guys always want me to be. I can be polished on multiple levels, even mediocre on multiple levels and still be better than half these mother fuckers out.

This shit was wack as fuck tho.

You said nothing. Jibber jabber nonsense.

This was not good lyrically or delivery wise. Keep practicing, though.

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Originally Posted by Infinity Tha rellik (Post 641072)

Very blanket statement type diss track. If I were to actually name drop them I couldn't record this and use it for the EP.

I wuldnt plan on usin this or anything like it

js bro.. u need a ghostwriter song writer.. fuck first u need a mic

dude u prolly just need a job n give it up.. n this is comin from me

Beats ok.
But why would u post somethinf and ralk about hownfuckednup and how much bs it is. Youre backwords man. U sure u aint on drugs dude. Wtf

LMFAO literally the best song I've written in years and y'all HATING. fucking fuuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnyyy you dudes is so mad.

I'm done.

Y'all can all suck a big fat dick.

Bro you've been trying to be a rapper for how long?

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Originally Posted by Infinity Tha rellik (Post 641145)

LMFAO literally the best song I've written in years and y'all HATING. fucking fuuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnyyy you dudes is so mad.

I'm done.

Y'all can all suck a big fat dick.

Yeah? Well, you know.. that’s just, like; your opinion, man.

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Originally Posted by dull boy (Post 641151)

Yeah? Well, you know.. that’s just, like; your opinion, man.

LOL

Hatin?
This shit aint good man.
Try again.

fin there's nothin for anyone to grab onto here

your hook is like literally nothing and you fucked it up

the lyrics are simple and the vibe is slow as fuck which is fine but your delivery which is at 50% i hope would have been the only saving grace on a cell phone recording

what do you expect people here, especially here, to be impressed by

record it correctly and this song would be solid but really 'u faggots are bitches' aint no one gonna listen to that as a hook

well look at the Brightside fin if you held the only relevant opinion of hip hop music quality ud be a fucking legend my guy.

and by "my guy" I mean never my guy.