Light Work

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-15-2018, 12:47 PM

To every sucka tryna run up ... you fuck 'n round wit death
Cos I'm a catch a body when I put this shotty to ya chest
You a hobby not a threat, I can kill ya just fa fun & I prolly wouldn't sweat
Watch me lob 'em to the left when they log-on to the net
How the fuck a bunch pussies tryna squabble wit a vet?
Tryna claw me wit ya text, talkin' softly under breath
... Until we face-to-face and I calmly interject ...
"I am honestly impressed by your comedy and jest
But be cautious where you step cos you cross that fuckin' line
And I'm bombin' on ya set! Where's the homage & respect
For a God ... you'd .. expect? ... But it's hard .. I suspect
...To nod ya fuckin' head ... wit a shard in ya neck!"
... Every card in ya deck that is dealt is a fail
Just to spell out ya fate all it takes is an 'L'
Put ya weight on the scale ... to see if you prevail
Against this ape wit a tail ... a Dragon Ball Z ...
Super Saiyian straight from Hell! Got sum hatred in my Cell(s)
Fa ya Buu and fa yaself, if I Freeza wit the flow ...
You gone need to seek the help ... of a cry•o•geni•cist
Had to copywrite the print ... they been bitin' since forever
Like the wife in Genesis! ... I could strike 'em wit the fist
That shoved the Titans in the Pit and caused the Continental Drift
That made Pangea fuckin' split! ... If I brush you on the chin
I'll crush ya mouth & upper-lip cus when I shadow-box the wind
I punch the mountains into cliffs or a pile of busted bricks ...
Or sum powder I can sniff! ... Got ya drownin' in ya piss ...
From the gallons that I spit! ... Ain't no cowards in the clique
Get devoured like a chip ... cos our power is legit
Fuck an outage or a glitch ... fed Galactus on a binge!
An assassin wit a grin ... I been "Deadpool'n" fools
Since Achilles took a swim ... inside... the "River Styx" ...
Just remember I'm the SHIT ... as I defecate these hits!
This is SELF signin' out .. on your death certificates!!!

Geno · 01-15-2018, 03:16 PM

Phewwwww. That flow is bonkers tho. Shit went inn around halfway and stayed there

For Battling · 01-15-2018, 03:47 PM

@ACTIVATE SELF why don’t you text battle?

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-15-2018, 04:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide

Phewwwww. That flow is bonkers tho. Shit went inn around halfway and stayed there

Yeah, I was going for the build up. Appreciate the read/feed, my dude.

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-15-2018, 04:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by For Battling

@ACTIVATE SELF why don’t you text battle?

Shit ...uh ...idk. I probably will now that you've posed the question.

For Battling · 01-15-2018, 04:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ACTIVATE SELF

Shit ...uh ...idk. I probably will now that you've posed the question.

NBL bro

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-15-2018, 04:57 PM

Ight word

Enbombz · 01-15-2018, 08:53 PM

this was ridiculous. Dope, dope work.

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-15-2018, 09:02 PM

Thanx, joog. Appreciate that.

Geno · 01-16-2018, 07:26 AM

Self got the smoothest flow i remember in a longgggg time. Shit is butter every thread

brokenhal0 · 01-17-2018, 06:08 PM

i might be a bitter old sociopath but this doesnt tickle my pickle ...at least you write tho thats all its about self expression

01-15-2018, 12:47 PM	#1
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 783 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584278	Light Work To every sucka tryna run up ... you fuck 'n round wit death Cos I'm a catch a body when I put this shotty to ya chest You a hobby not a threat, I can kill ya just fa fun & I prolly wouldn't sweat Watch me lob 'em to the left when they log-on to the net How the fuck a bunch pussies tryna squabble wit a vet? Tryna claw me wit ya text, talkin' softly under breath ... Until we face-to-face and I calmly interject ... "I am honestly impressed by your comedy and jest But be cautious where you step cos you cross that fuckin' line And I'm bombin' on ya set! Where's the homage & respect For a God ... you'd .. expect? ... But it's hard .. I suspect ...To nod ya fuckin' head ... wit a shard in ya neck!" ... Every card in ya deck that is dealt is a fail Just to spell out ya fate all it takes is an 'L' Put ya weight on the scale ... to see if you prevail Against this ape wit a tail ... a Dragon Ball Z ... Super Saiyian straight from Hell! Got sum hatred in my Cell(s) Fa ya Buu and fa yaself, if I Freeza wit the flow ... You gone need to seek the help ... of a cry•o•geni•cist Had to copywrite the print ... they been bitin' since forever Like the wife in Genesis! ... I could strike 'em wit the fist That shoved the Titans in the Pit and caused the Continental Drift That made Pangea fuckin' split! ... If I brush you on the chin I'll crush ya mouth & upper-lip cus when I shadow-box the wind I punch the mountains into cliffs or a pile of busted bricks ... Or sum powder I can sniff! ... Got ya drownin' in ya piss ... From the gallons that I spit! ... Ain't no cowards in the clique Get devoured like a chip ... cos our power is legit Fuck an outage or a glitch ... fed Galactus on a binge! An assassin wit a grin ... I been "Deadpool'n" fools Since Achilles took a swim ... inside... the "River Styx" ... Just remember I'm the SHIT ... as I defecate these hits! This is SELF signin' out .. on your death certificates!!! Last edited by ACTIVATE SELF; 01-15-2018 at 12:58 PM.

01-15-2018, 03:16 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Phewwwww. That flow is bonkers tho. Shit went inn around halfway and stayed there __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

01-16-2018, 07:26 AM	#10
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Self got the smoothest flow i remember in a longgggg time. Shit is butter every thread __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

01-15-2018, 03:47 PM	#3
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	@ACTIVATE SELF why don’t you text battle?

01-15-2018, 04:57 PM	#7
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 783 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584278	Ight word

01-15-2018, 08:53 PM	#8
Enbombz Not Joog Join Date: Nov 2016 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 9-5 Rep Power: 5907772	this was ridiculous. Dope, dope work.

01-15-2018, 09:02 PM	#9
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 783 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584278	Thanx, joog. Appreciate that.

01-17-2018, 06:08 PM	#11
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	i might be a bitter old sociopath but this doesnt tickle my pickle ...at least you write tho thats all its about self expression