Basic M vs Unfukwitable - Unfukwitable Wins

Diablo · 01-15-2018, 07:07 AM

Basic M: I actually fucked with that opener tbh, I just don't think it's so suited to text but in a live battle I can see me liking that lol The bags thing has been done at this point, Amityville Horror was bonkers though, Mark henry was a nice throwback line and the closer was a cool play as well. I fucked with the later half of your verse a bit more than the first but this had some heat.

Unfuk: Cool nameplay for an opener that worked well, I wasn't so keen on the forum shaker line but it wasn't bad by any means, just not my thing. I didn't feel the quarter of blood missing ish, maybe it went over my head? Singing with the mop was dope to me, I think that's been slept on this week. I liked the concept of the closer but not the wording tbh, think that took some shine off what you wanted. Anyway, cool battle, closer than expected here, Basic M started slower then really picked up... Unfuk kept it pretty consistent and both had a real heater in there each so consistency is what I go off and Unfuk had that more so for me here. Unfuk gets my vote.

01-15-2018, 07:07 AM	#16
Diablo Badgerdick Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Showdown City Posts: 2,633 Battle Record: 11-2 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 22685552	Basic M: I actually fucked with that opener tbh, I just don't think it's so suited to text but in a live battle I can see me liking that lol The bags thing has been done at this point, Amityville Horror was bonkers though, Mark henry was a nice throwback line and the closer was a cool play as well. I fucked with the later half of your verse a bit more than the first but this had some heat. Unfuk: Cool nameplay for an opener that worked well, I wasn't so keen on the forum shaker line but it wasn't bad by any means, just not my thing. I didn't feel the quarter of blood missing ish, maybe it went over my head? Singing with the mop was dope to me, I think that's been slept on this week. I liked the concept of the closer but not the wording tbh, think that took some shine off what you wanted. Anyway, cool battle, closer than expected here, Basic M started slower then really picked up... Unfuk kept it pretty consistent and both had a real heater in there each so consistency is what I go off and Unfuk had that more so for me here. Unfuk gets my vote.