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Basic M vs Unfukwitable - Unfukwitable Wins
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Down for 12
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12 it is
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clips cause a slight shift. gat at ya kids mug, its a tight grip
Put the hawk to ur infants face, told the bastard bite this Pistol whip teeth out. That fraud shit gets exposed Mac claps leave u blacked out till u ghost like a bags video Unimpactful NC status. Even ur style is bummy, queer not only r u broke, but ur now the most hated member here Stop sly talk. Big guns hit hard & leave ya family tortured Bitch im lettin' that shotty go in every room, Amittyville Horror Hunt u down for days. Escalade can splash brains plenty Big body hits u & leaves u stretched out, signature Mark Henry Shorties rather cut flesh than to stop & have a talk Any bitch in Unstable lives with agonizing suicidal thoughts #PutFootsOnEm |
I'll wrap ya body up & wait until the blood turns to brown stains,
& then His fam get a Basic package out the blue it's not a downgrade. U've been spanked since ya birth; & Now U'll do a flip after the Smack...a Forum shaker alert... I'll leave this dorks chin hangin; & These aint just Basic beats it's cool enough to make Orc's Gym Playlist. Im droppin weapons off the rope if son trippin; Put Metal Slugs in em... lets see if he can Continue with a Qrt of blood missin! It's truly yours ain't 1 nigga who use Uzi's more; But Today Im singin w/ a Mop til they treat they crime scene like doing chores. No more rust I'm back from the benches; To come and leave M stretched like That was Delicious! Mmmmmmmmmmmm! |
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clips cause a slight shift. gat at ya kids mug, its a tight grip
Put the hawk to ur infants face, told the bastard bite this straight Pistol whip teeth out. That fraud shit gets exposed Mac claps leave u blacked out till u ghost like a bags video expected alot of these, it was aighh Unimpactful NC status. Even ur style is bummy, queer not only r u broke, but ur now the most hated member here same asabove Stop sly talk. Big guns hit hard & leave ya family tortured Bitch im lettin' that shotty go in every room, Amittyville Horror This better, not bad. Hunt u down for days. Escalade can splash brains plenty Big body hits u & leaves u stretched out, signature Mark Henry This ok, setup tho. Shorties rather cut flesh than to stop & have a talk Any bitch in Unstable lives with agonizing suicidal thoughts This cool. Wording a bit iffy. vs I'll wrap ya body up & wait until the blood turns to brown stains, & then His fam get a Basic package out the blue it's not a downgrade. Cool opener. U've been spanked since ya birth; & Now U'll do a flip after the Smack...a Forum shaker alert... Nah, should done more w/ the smack concept Felt lazy I'll leave this dorks chin hangin; & These aint just Basic beats it's cool enough to make Orc's Gym Playlist. I didnt like it, statement. Im droppin weapons off the rope if son trippin; Put Metal Slugs in em... lets see if he can Continue with a Qrt of blood missin! Ok, this not bad. Qrt missing etc It's truly yours ain't 1 nigga who use Uzi's more; But Today Im singin w/ a Mop til they treat they crime scene like doing chores. Fuck w itt No more rust I'm back from the benches; To come and leave M stretched like That was Delicious! See what ya did, ehhh This was hard tbh. Unfuk had the highs & lows, Basic nothing too crazy but more consistent. Could go back n forth. vote Unfuk |
basic - amityville , and mark henry was cool
unfuk - singin wit a mop , and stretch M out was fire v-unfuk |
clips cause a slight shift. gat at ya kids mug, its a tight grip
Put the hawk to ur infants face, told the bastard bite this Ehh Pistol whip teeth out. That fraud shit gets exposed Mac claps leave u blacked out till u ghost like a bags video Ok Unimpactful NC status. Even ur style is bummy, queer not only r u broke, but ur now the most hated member here Lol, light Stop sly talk. Big guns hit hard & leave ya family tortured Bitch im lettin' that shotty go in every room, Amittyville Horror Cool Hunt u down for days. Escalade can splash brains plenty Big body hits u & leaves u stretched out, signature Mark Henry Cool Shorties rather cut flesh than to stop & have a talk Any bitch in Unstable lives with agonizing suicidal thoughts Cool I'll wrap ya body up & wait until the blood turns to brown stains, & then His fam get a Basic package out the blue it's not a downgrade. Cool U've been spanked since ya birth; & Now U'll do a flip after the Smack...a Forum shaker alert... Ehh I'll leave this dorks chin hangin; & These aint just Basic beats it's cool enough to make Orc's Gym Playlist. Eh Im droppin weapons off the rope if son trippin; Put Metal Slugs in em... lets see if he can Continue with a Qrt of blood missin! Ehh It's truly yours ain't 1 nigga who use Uzi's more; But Today Im singin w/ a Mop til they treat they crime scene like doing chores. Cool No more rust I'm back from the benches; To come and leave M stretched like That was Delicious! Ooook Close call.. could go either way I felt some bars needed more but overall thought basic landed better punches here so he edges it |
I'll wrap ya body up & wait until the blood turns to brown stains,
& then His fam get a Basic package out the blue it's not a downgrade. aiight U've been spanked since ya birth; & Now U'll do a flip after the Smack...a Forum shaker alert... Feels a bit lazy on the punch. But i like the idea of it. I'll leave this dorks chin hangin; & These aint just Basic beats it's cool enough to make Orc's Gym Playlist. This doesn't even rhyme man. Setup is bad & the punch couldve been ok if you worded it better. Im droppin weapons off the rope if son trippin; Put Metal Slugs in em... lets see if he can Continue with a Qrt of blood missin! Eh It's truly yours ain't 1 nigga who use Uzi's more; But Today Im singin w/ a Mop til they treat they crime scene like doing chores. I liked this one, cool. No more rust I'm back from the benches; To come and leave M stretched like That was Delicious! Ur not really good with rhyming end rhymes it seems lol. This isn't a good one either. clips cause a slight shift. gat at ya kids mug, its a tight grip Put the hawk to ur infants face, told the bastard bite this Eh Pistol whip teeth out. That fraud shit gets exposed Mac claps leave u blacked out till u ghost like a bags video Cool Unimpactful NC status. Even ur style is bummy, queer not only r u broke, but ur now the most hated member here LOL, damn lesnar he calling you out. This was a cool one. Stop sly talk. Big guns hit hard & leave ya family tortured Bitch im lettin' that shotty go in every room, Amittyville Horror Eh Hunt u down for days. Escalade can splash brains plenty Big body hits u & leaves u stretched out, signature Mark Henry This is ok, ur really generic here. There has to be some useful personal jibs u can use yea? Shorties rather cut flesh than to stop & have a talk Any bitch in Unstable lives with agonizing suicidal thoughts Cool lil name flip nothing heavy, now this is an acceptable slant rhyme. Unfuk some of your bars didnt rhyme a bit lol. v/Basic M - he had better lands and a better flow. |
Needs more votes
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I'll wrap ya body up & wait until the blood turns to brown stains, & then His fam get a Basic package out the blue it's not a downgrade. Okay U've been spanked since ya birth; & Now U'll do a flip after the Smack...a Forum shaker alert... Okay I'll leave this dorks chin hangin; & These aint just Basic beats it's cool enough to make Orc's Gym Playlist. Lil off Im droppin weapons off the rope if son trippin; Put Metal Slugs in em... lets see if he can Continue with a Qrt of blood missin! Lol okay It's truly yours ain't 1 nigga who use Uzi's more; But Today Im singin w/ a Mop til they treat they crime scene like doing chores. Worded clean No more rust I'm back from the benches; To come and leave M stretched like That was Delicious! Pretty good V unfuk |
Basic
Opener is basic flip but rhyme construction is top notch. Well written. Dark video bars -- I've seen several variations over the past couple weeks. Hated member is a personal diss, but I don't get the wp if there is any. Amityville bar is hard. Mark Henry bar is cool. Closer is deece. Unfuk Opener is cool concept -- could've been executed a lot more effectively, imo. Smack is ok. Gym Playlist is cool. Blood missin is cool imagery but no wp. Chores line is cool concept but execution lacked. Closer is lol. Probably the best line in the battle. This is pretty close -- I feel like one really killer line on one side or the other could've put it out of reach. As is, I think Unfuk was dealing with better concepts, although I think stumbled a bit in execution. I give it to Unfukwitable. Fun battle, dudes. |
clips cause a slight shift. gat at ya kids mug, its a tight grip
Put the hawk to ur infants face, told the bastard bite this lol nice Pistol whip teeth out. That fraud shit gets exposed Mac claps leave u blacked out till u ghost like a bags video too many of these lines in recent weeks, played now Unimpactful NC status. Even ur style is bummy, queer not only r u broke, but ur now the most hated member here alright Stop sly talk. Big guns hit hard & leave ya family tortured Bitch im lettin' that shotty go in every room, Amittyville Horror fireeeeeee Hunt u down for days. Escalade can splash brains plenty Big body hits u & leaves u stretched out, signature Mark Henry pretty cool Shorties rather cut flesh than to stop & have a talk Any bitch in Unstable lives with agonizing suicidal thoughts ah nah this seemed forced and didn’t work for me Vs I'll wrap ya body up & wait until the blood turns to brown stains, & then His fam get a Basic package out the blue it's not a downgrade. alright U've been spanked since ya birth; & Now U'll do a flip after the Smack...a Forum shaker alert... thought this was nice tbh I'll leave this dorks chin hangin; & These aint just Basic beats it's cool enough to make Orc's Gym Playlist. decent Im droppin weapons off the rope if son trippin; Put Metal Slugs in em... lets see if he can Continue with a Qrt of blood missin! decent at best, no tie ins or anything here. Mostly just a horrorxore bar It's truly yours ain't 1 nigga who use Uzi's more; But Today Im singin w/ a Mop til they treat they crime scene like doing chores. ok No more rust I'm back from the benches; To come and leave M stretched like That was Delicious! lol I liked this Excellent battle here, two very different styles dropping identical material pretty much. I think Unfuk had dope concepts but the extra simplicity in his setups and closets hurt the impact of the bars. Basic M had LOTB with amitybille horror that shit was fire. The hawk bar was dope too. I think basic edges this with better wording and execution which made his bars hit harder. Vote Basic M |
Hunt u down for days. Escalade can splash brains plenty
Big body hits u & leaves u stretched out, signature Mark Henry Vs U've been spanked since ya birth; & Now U'll do a flip after the Smack...a Forum shaker alert... So this style is a lot different than the style I’m used to seeing from Unfuk, not sure when he switched it up. The simplistic setup isn’t always a good thing tho, like the forum shaker one could’ve went from decent to dope with a better setup leading to it imo. I think the short, undetailed setups killed some of the impact with your bars. Basic was ok, seen better from him before. Gonna edge this to unfuk v/Fuk |
Basic M: I actually fucked with that opener tbh, I just don't think it's so suited to text but in a live battle I can see me liking that lol The bags thing has been done at this point, Amityville Horror was bonkers though, Mark henry was a nice throwback line and the closer was a cool play as well. I fucked with the later half of your verse a bit more than the first but this had some heat.
Unfuk: Cool nameplay for an opener that worked well, I wasn't so keen on the forum shaker line but it wasn't bad by any means, just not my thing. I didn't feel the quarter of blood missing ish, maybe it went over my head? Singing with the mop was dope to me, I think that's been slept on this week. I liked the concept of the closer but not the wording tbh, think that took some shine off what you wanted. Anyway, cool battle, closer than expected here, Basic M started slower then really picked up... Unfuk kept it pretty consistent and both had a real heater in there each so consistency is what I go off and Unfuk had that more so for me here. Unfuk gets my vote. |
Currently 6-4 Fuk.
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Fuk wins 6-4
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