Basic M vs Unfukwitable - Unfukwitable Wins

Clout · 01-14-2018, 07:03 AM

I'll wrap ya body up & wait until the blood turns to brown stains,
& then His fam get a Basic package out the blue it's not a downgrade.

aiight

U've been spanked since ya birth;
& Now U'll do a flip after the Smack...a Forum shaker alert...

Feels a bit lazy on the punch. But i like the idea of it.

I'll leave this dorks chin hangin;
& These aint just Basic beats it's cool enough to make Orc's Gym Playlist.

This doesn't even rhyme man. Setup is bad & the punch couldve been ok if you worded it better.

Im droppin weapons off the rope if son trippin;
Put Metal Slugs in em... lets see if he can Continue with a Qrt of blood missin!

Eh

It's truly yours ain't 1 nigga who use Uzi's more;
But Today Im singin w/ a Mop til they treat they crime scene like doing chores.

I liked this one, cool.

No more rust I'm back from the benches;
To come and leave M stretched like That was Delicious!

Ur not really good with rhyming end rhymes it seems lol. This isn't a good one either.

clips cause a slight shift. gat at ya kids mug, its a tight grip
Put the hawk to ur infants face, told the bastard bite this

Eh

Pistol whip teeth out. That fraud shit gets exposed
Mac claps leave u blacked out till u ghost like a bags video

Cool

Unimpactful NC status. Even ur style is bummy, queer
not only r u broke, but ur now the most hated member here

LOL, damn lesnar he calling you out. This was a cool one.

Stop sly talk. Big guns hit hard & leave ya family tortured
Bitch im lettin' that shotty go in every room, Amittyville Horror

Eh

Hunt u down for days. Escalade can splash brains plenty
Big body hits u & leaves u stretched out, signature Mark Henry

This is ok, ur really generic here. There has to be some useful personal jibs u can use yea?

Shorties rather cut flesh than to stop & have a talk
Any bitch in Unstable lives with agonizing suicidal thoughts

Cool lil name flip nothing heavy, now this is an acceptable slant rhyme. Unfuk some of your bars didnt rhyme a bit lol.

v/Basic M - he had better lands and a better flow.

01-14-2018, 07:03 AM	#11
Clout Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 846 Battle Record: 1-0 Rep Power: 6428575	I'll wrap ya body up & wait until the blood turns to brown stains, & then His fam get a Basic package out the blue it's not a downgrade. aiight U've been spanked since ya birth; & Now U'll do a flip after the Smack...a Forum shaker alert... Feels a bit lazy on the punch. But i like the idea of it. I'll leave this dorks chin hangin; & These aint just Basic beats it's cool enough to make Orc's Gym Playlist. This doesn't even rhyme man. Setup is bad & the punch couldve been ok if you worded it better. Im droppin weapons off the rope if son trippin; Put Metal Slugs in em... lets see if he can Continue with a Qrt of blood missin! Eh It's truly yours ain't 1 nigga who use Uzi's more; But Today Im singin w/ a Mop til they treat they crime scene like doing chores. I liked this one, cool. No more rust I'm back from the benches; To come and leave M stretched like That was Delicious! Ur not really good with rhyming end rhymes it seems lol. This isn't a good one either. clips cause a slight shift. gat at ya kids mug, its a tight grip Put the hawk to ur infants face, told the bastard bite this Eh Pistol whip teeth out. That fraud shit gets exposed Mac claps leave u blacked out till u ghost like a bags video Cool Unimpactful NC status. Even ur style is bummy, queer not only r u broke, but ur now the most hated member here LOL, damn lesnar he calling you out. This was a cool one. Stop sly talk. Big guns hit hard & leave ya family tortured Bitch im lettin' that shotty go in every room, Amittyville Horror Eh Hunt u down for days. Escalade can splash brains plenty Big body hits u & leaves u stretched out, signature Mark Henry This is ok, ur really generic here. There has to be some useful personal jibs u can use yea? Shorties rather cut flesh than to stop & have a talk Any bitch in Unstable lives with agonizing suicidal thoughts Cool lil name flip nothing heavy, now this is an acceptable slant rhyme. Unfuk some of your bars didnt rhyme a bit lol. v/Basic M - he had better lands and a better flow.