real niggas

KennyCerealBowl · 05-18-2013, 01:59 PM

Born eccentric, so forced detention maybe penitentiary
See since elementary, normal wasn't my element
These Humans just didn't seem legitament,
Thoughts of taking a little medicine called defiance,
We all need it! Make alliance! Raise your fist to the highest
Altitude with attitude say I make the rules
I live by if I want to smoke to my eyes looks like a martians
Skin portion the government shoudn't pardon, our life is limited
And people want to be in control, when we don't have it
You could be born with a disability, or die walking up the street
Swerve off your car accidentely, so start living with that body
Your soul reincarnated into. Experiment with what the Earth gives
Because one day you might regret it.

Dope girl · 05-19-2013, 02:21 PM

Sorry, I'm not feeling it. simple to me, add more creativity & complexity.

6/10

KennyCerealBowl · 05-19-2013, 03:04 PM

O.O' really? Simple. and not creative? break down that flow for me.

Witty · 05-19-2013, 03:59 PM

Altitude with attitude say I make the rules
I live by if I want to smoke to my eyes looks like a martians
Skin portion the government shoudn't pardon, our life is limited
And people want to be in control, when we don't have it
You could be born with a disability, or die walking up the street
Swerve off your car accidentely, so start living with that body
Your soul reincarnated into. Experiment with what the Earth gives
Because one day you might regret it.

None of this rhymes.

KennyCerealBowl · 05-19-2013, 06:57 PM

Thanks pal

KennyCerealBowl · 05-19-2013, 07:16 PM

Creative and innovative rhyme scheme can be tricky huh witt?
Here i'll break it to you
A(internal)BBBBCBBB(internal)DDFF.
And Alot more of internals, slant rhymes and couplets to create the rhyme scheme.

Psh It doesn't rhyme nigga learn your fundamentals.
Also managing to fit 8 syllables in one line without sounding
Overbearing.
Aint up to this level.

Just Write · 05-19-2013, 08:14 PM

Yea this wasnt nice dude

Natural · 05-19-2013, 08:31 PM

This cheerio motha fucka got all mouthy about netcees and said a bunch of bullshit
and now he posting on it. Lol.
What a queef

KennyCerealBowl · 05-19-2013, 08:43 PM

Ugh i wanted more feeds nd im to lazy too register somewhere else.

natural is that you code? Lmaoo got butthurt cus niggas said your true mc drop was wack.
came in with all that confidence just to be shut down.
But your right I shoudn't have posted here should have known better that only you type
of niggas would do this type of shit.
Not feed me say its wack and gain some internet bravado lol

Maximus · 05-19-2013, 08:48 PM

No hate but This was wack, some lines dont rhyme and the piece is boring and simple as fuck, no need to be cocky my dude. Just step ur game up

EndSane · 05-19-2013, 08:58 PM

Lmao guy die in a blazing fire u flaming fag boy...I don't recall anyone saying a true emcee was whack...Just wasnt getting feed is all...Go back to rr with your tail tucked in between ur legs you irrelevant cum stain...

Ghost1 · 05-19-2013, 10:07 PM

This is sum real nigga shit.

VividEnds · 05-19-2013, 11:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KennyCerealBowl

Creative and innovative rhyme scheme can be tricky huh witt?
Here i'll break it to you
A(internal)BBBBCBBB(internal)DDFF.
And Alot more of internals, slant rhymes and couplets to create the rhyme scheme.

Psh It doesn't rhyme nigga learn your fundamentals.
Also managing to fit 8 syllables in one line without sounding
Overbearing.
Aint up to this level.

lmfao

cats break doors with in Sturbridge Village with cartilage that snap in four places

Rhyme scheme ABBABAB(internal)BBBBBBB(external)CABABABBBABABBB

fucking retard

why don't you just write this flatulence in a notebook, write rave reviews in the margins, and hide that shit under your bed?

anyone that don't think your nice is auto whack

Cool story brah

Fig · 05-20-2013, 02:12 AM

Can we stop the hideous fucking free posts? Jesus, there are some other pieces that could be at the top receiving feed. Someone man up and quit the bickering

Witty · 05-20-2013, 11:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KennyCerealBowl

I don't ya wack to me. All of u suck fuck gen fuck sane fuck u fuck ur crew
Lol.
Call it wack I know its just your insecurities in action.

I'm better than you.

Zen · 05-20-2013, 11:56 AM

I just had to go through this fuckin thread and delete like 50 fuckin posts. Do not shamelessly up this wack shit again faggot. Go drop feed on other posts and then I'll reopen this.

05-18-2013, 01:59 PM	#1
KennyCerealBowl Do what is right. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 954121	real niggas Born eccentric, so forced detention maybe penitentiary See since elementary, normal wasn't my element These Humans just didn't seem legitament, Thoughts of taking a little medicine called defiance, We all need it! Make alliance! Raise your fist to the highest Altitude with attitude say I make the rules I live by if I want to smoke to my eyes looks like a martians Skin portion the government shoudn't pardon, our life is limited And people want to be in control, when we don't have it You could be born with a disability, or die walking up the street Swerve off your car accidentely, so start living with that body Your soul reincarnated into. Experiment with what the Earth gives Because one day you might regret it.

05-19-2013, 03:59 PM	#4
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Altitude with attitude say I make the rules I live by if I want to smoke to my eyes looks like a martians Skin portion the government shoudn't pardon, our life is limited And people want to be in control, when we don't have it You could be born with a disability, or die walking up the street Swerve off your car accidentely, so start living with that body Your soul reincarnated into. Experiment with what the Earth gives Because one day you might regret it. None of this rhymes. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

05-19-2013, 07:16 PM	#6
KennyCerealBowl Do what is right. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 954121	Creative and innovative rhyme scheme can be tricky huh witt? Here i'll break it to you A(internal)BBBBCBBB(internal)DDFF. And Alot more of internals, slant rhymes and couplets to create the rhyme scheme. Psh It doesn't rhyme nigga learn your fundamentals. Also managing to fit 8 syllables in one line without sounding Overbearing. Aint up to this level. Last edited by KennyCerealBowl; 05-19-2013 at 07:20 PM.

05-19-2013, 08:14 PM	#7
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	Yea this wasnt nice dude __________________

05-19-2013, 08:58 PM	#11
EndSane Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 88 Battle Record: 0-1 Champed Challenge Week I Challenge Week II Challenge Week III Challenge Week IV Challenge Week V Challenge Week VI Challenge Week VII Challenge Week VIII Challenge Week IX Challenge Week X Rep Power: 38	Lmao guy die in a blazing fire u flaming fag boy...I don't recall anyone saying a true emcee was whack...Just wasnt getting feed is all...Go back to rr with your tail tucked in between ur legs you irrelevant cum stain... __________________ Delirious Nomads

05-19-2013, 02:21 PM	#2
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	Sorry, I'm not feeling it. simple to me, add more creativity & complexity. 6/10

05-19-2013, 03:04 PM	#3
KennyCerealBowl Do what is right. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 954121	O.O' really? Simple. and not creative? break down that flow for me.

05-19-2013, 06:57 PM	#5
KennyCerealBowl Do what is right. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 954121	Thanks pal

05-19-2013, 08:31 PM	#8
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	This cheerio motha fucka got all mouthy about netcees and said a bunch of bullshit and now he posting on it. Lol. What a queef

05-19-2013, 08:43 PM	#9
KennyCerealBowl Do what is right. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 954121	Ugh i wanted more feeds nd im to lazy too register somewhere else. natural is that you code? Lmaoo got butthurt cus niggas said your true mc drop was wack. came in with all that confidence just to be shut down. But your right I shoudn't have posted here should have known better that only you type of niggas would do this type of shit. Not feed me say its wack and gain some internet bravado lol

05-19-2013, 08:48 PM	#10
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	No hate but This was wack, some lines dont rhyme and the piece is boring and simple as fuck, no need to be cocky my dude. Just step ur game up

05-20-2013, 02:12 AM	#14
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	Can we stop the hideous fucking free posts? Jesus, there are some other pieces that could be at the top receiving feed. Someone man up and quit the bickering __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

05-20-2013, 11:56 AM	#16
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I just had to go through this fuckin thread and delete like 50 fuckin posts. Do not shamelessly up this wack shit again faggot. Go drop feed on other posts and then I'll reopen this.