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05-19-2013, 07:16 PM
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Creative and innovative rhyme scheme can be tricky huh witt?
Here i'll break it to you A(internal)BBBBCBBB(internal)DDFF. And Alot more of internals, slant rhymes and couplets to create the rhyme scheme. Psh It doesn't rhyme nigga learn your fundamentals. Also managing to fit 8 syllables in one line without sounding Overbearing. Aint up to this level. Last edited by KennyCerealBowl; 05-19-2013 at 07:20 PM. |
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05-19-2013, 11:45 PM
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cats break doors with in Sturbridge Village with cartilage that snap in four places Rhyme scheme ABBABAB(internal)BBBBBBB(external)CABABABBBABABBB fucking retard why don't you just write this flatulence in a notebook, write rave reviews in the margins, and hide that shit under your bed? anyone that don't think your nice is auto whack Cool story brah
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