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Old 05-24-2016, 06:12 PM   #18
Terror wrist
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So am reading this again, but with the voice of George the poet, mentally vocalising it in form of spoken poetry. 3yrs after and am mentally better equipped to resonate with your poetic write up and appreciate your ingenious creativity with respect to the "rhythmic ryhme interlude" (see! I just christened the words made in bold.) Howbeit so I wrote with a similar pattern last year,but mine was a repetitive format.
its just feels like a skill employed by poets who dig deep into their works.
i envy your pen sire.
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