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This nigga said "then the deuce go across his face like disco moves"
Dat boi good *gwitty voice*
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i'll do my best to try and vote on some of these.
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It wouldn't have been corny imo. Probably just unnecessary to add the john travolta detail to it.
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I have the same problem some time. Trying to do too much. Multi-layered concepts can work but it's gotta be done worded immaculately and come across unforced. Most of the time they just come across convoluted or straight messy. Less is more, which is why I fucked with that bar. It was slick and direct. But everyone is looking for different things when judging.
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