Week 17 Chat/Predictions

[Kenny the OG]

Originally Posted by Joe Boston

Read that shit was nice u think it wouldve been corny if ge said im.john travolta with the gun duece going across ur face like disco moves

It wouldn't have been corny imo. Probably just unnecessary to add the john travolta detail to it.

[Joe Boston]

Originally Posted by Kenny the OG

It wouldn't have been corny imo. Probably just unnecessary to add the john travolta detail to it.

True lol wanted to add more character thats my issue think to much visually lol

[Kenny the OG]

Originally Posted by Joe Boston

True lol wanted to add more character thats my issue think to much visually lol

I have the same problem some time. Trying to do too much. Multi-layered concepts can work but it's gotta be done worded immaculately and come across unforced. Most of the time they just come across convoluted or straight messy. Less is more, which is why I fucked with that bar. It was slick and direct. But everyone is looking for different things when judging.