Unfukwitable 2-5 vs Og Smokinstein 0-2 - OG WINS BY NS

Kenny the OG · 05-01-2016, 10:57 PM

Your verses put niggaz to sleep, you spread da zzzzzz quicker than the outbreak monkey.
Fucking flunky, u write nothing dope, last quote you had was from an insurance company.
Ehh. I get it, it was almost funny but it didnt hit hard
Soon as I saw your name, I lost all motivation, to take part in this written altercation.
I got as much inspiration, for this to "workout" than a suicidal obese hospital patient.
Nah. Too much wording and u didn't have to put workout in quotes. The connection speaks for itself and tbh it was basis overall. No hate just my honest assessment
I'm P.O'd cause you'll probably no-show, running from bars like you violated probation.
That jus means you a pacifist, who dreads-swinging like a couple fighting Haitians.
prophetic bar. But still I'm just not a fan of the execution. Althiugh this concept could've been dope
That's ok, I saw your bitch in the club, on the other side of the room just dancing.
She a slut bucket, no romancing, I just called her a-cross-fore-head like Charles manson.
I read this in my Dot reach God voice. This is a reach

Idk fam tbh I'm just not a fan of how you're wording your setup/punches. Some of the concepts are oook but don't hit hard to me bc of how u executed it. But I can't hate tho because I'm a firm biever in everyone having their own style and thought process. Keep doing your thing but clean up that wording a bit.

Og smokinstein · 05-01-2016, 11:16 PM

My nigga...thx for the feedback but.
I jus wrote shit.. So i could get the w
I figured my opponet would be a no-show, since he didnt check in.

My shit was some bullshit indeed.
No need to waste good bars,when u know a nigga gonna no show

05-01-2016, 10:57 PM	#1
Kenny the OG tutankhamen Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 363 Battle Record: 6-5 Rep Power: 16107559	Your verses put niggaz to sleep, you spread da zzzzzz quicker than the outbreak monkey. Fucking flunky, u write nothing dope, last quote you had was from an insurance company. Ehh. I get it, it was almost funny but it didnt hit hard Soon as I saw your name, I lost all motivation, to take part in this written altercation. I got as much inspiration, for this to "workout" than a suicidal obese hospital patient. Nah. Too much wording and u didn't have to put workout in quotes. The connection speaks for itself and tbh it was basis overall. No hate just my honest assessment I'm P.O'd cause you'll probably no-show, running from bars like you violated probation. That jus means you a pacifist, who dreads-swinging like a couple fighting Haitians. prophetic bar. But still I'm just not a fan of the execution. Althiugh this concept could've been dope That's ok, I saw your bitch in the club, on the other side of the room just dancing. She a slut bucket, no romancing, I just called her a-cross-fore-head like Charles manson. I read this in my Dot reach God voice. This is a reach Idk fam tbh I'm just not a fan of how you're wording your setup/punches. Some of the concepts are oook but don't hit hard to me bc of how u executed it. But I can't hate tho because I'm a firm biever in everyone having their own style and thought process. Keep doing your thing but clean up that wording a bit. __________________ Wordplay? My words ain't meant to be played with.

05-01-2016, 11:16 PM	#2
Og smokinstein The Marathon Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 114 Battle Record: 3-4 Rep Power: 352399	My nigga...thx for the feedback but. I jus wrote shit.. So i could get the w I figured my opponet would be a no-show, since he didnt check in. My shit was some bullshit indeed. No need to waste good bars,when u know a nigga gonna no show