Netcees - Unfukwitable 2-5 vs Og Smokinstein 0-2

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Unfukwitable 2-5 vs Og Smokinstein 0-2 - OG WINS BY NS

NBL Season 9

Due FRIDAY
Extension will be given if asked due to late start. You MUST ask though.

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
NO recycling
You must check in
Don't edit after your opponent has posted
2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
Don't be an idiot
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@Unfukwitable @Og smokinstein

How many bars??? @Unfukwitable?

Your verses put niggaz to sleep, you spread da zzzzzz quicker than the outbreak monkey.
Fucking flunky, u write nothing dope, last quote you had was from an insurance company.
Soon as I saw your name, I lost all motivation, to take part in this written altercation.
I got as much inspiration, for this to "workout" than a suicidal obese hospital patient.
I'm P.O'd cause you'll probably no-show, running from bars like you violated probation.
That jus means you a pacifist, who dreads-swinging like a couple fighting Haitians.

That's ok, I saw your bitch in the club, on the other side of the room just dancing.
She a slut bucket, no romancing, I just called her a-cross-fore-head like Charles manson.

Hopefully next time I get somebody... Who will make me write.

Your verses put niggaz to sleep, you spread da zzzzzz quicker than the outbreak monkey.
Fucking flunky, u write nothing dope, last quote you had was from an insurance company.
Ehh. I get it, it was almost funny but it didnt hit hard
Soon as I saw your name, I lost all motivation, to take part in this written altercation.
I got as much inspiration, for this to "workout" than a suicidal obese hospital patient.
Nah. Too much wording and u didn't have to put workout in quotes. The connection speaks for itself and tbh it was basis overall. No hate just my honest assessment
I'm P.O'd cause you'll probably no-show, running from bars like you violated probation.
That jus means you a pacifist, who dreads-swinging like a couple fighting Haitians.
prophetic bar. But still I'm just not a fan of the execution. Althiugh this concept could've been dope
That's ok, I saw your bitch in the club, on the other side of the room just dancing.
She a slut bucket, no romancing, I just called her a-cross-fore-head like Charles manson.
I read this in my Dot reach God voice. This is a reach

Idk fam tbh I'm just not a fan of how you're wording your setup/punches. Some of the concepts are oook but don't hit hard to me bc of how u executed it. But I can't hate tho because I'm a firm biever in everyone having their own style and thought process. Keep doing your thing but clean up that wording a bit.

My nigga...thx for the feedback but.
I jus wrote shit.. So i could get the w
I figured my opponet would be a no-show, since he didnt check in.

My shit was some bullshit indeed.
No need to waste good bars,when u know a nigga gonna no show