04-26-2013, 04:10 PM | #1 |
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Chyeahhh!!! vs Lotto Smirk 9 - CHYEAHHHHH WINS
10 lines due in 10 minutes
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04-26-2013, 04:17 PM | #2 |
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let the llama burst at lotto smirk, you need alotta work
put the nine, the four five, the tre five seven to em, given him that lotto work make his medulla oblongata jerk, I'll make you do that dance get stomped out they'll say I'm like a choreographer how I make a busta move that fast incorporate the hook, that jab, stop it with all yah jive straight up and down, I'll make yah biological clock stop at 5 stop it 5, you gettin that hard data here's a taste of death, that graveyard flavor, I'm about that cold hard paper
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04-26-2013, 04:20 PM | #3 |
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check man might not be ten mins gotta put my little lad to bed man
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04-26-2013, 04:21 PM | #4 |
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can edit ya verse if ya want man?
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04-26-2013, 04:23 PM | #5 |
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he speaks....
you've got 10 minutes mr quickie
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04-26-2013, 04:38 PM | #6 |
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Fuck a keystyle against this faggot vagina he better get back
If someone shouting chyeahhh dont worry its his girl i got my dick inside of that Ya girls a slut, I said i was tryna put my kid to bed ya need to learn some respect but his idea of having kids...was flushed down the drain with a failed a paternity test Fucking rushing me,last time i only had ten minutes i was nailing a broad reminds me of a time with ya girl the convo went "You got ten mins then chyeahh walks thru the door" I dont give a fuck, i dont rate this guy i call this a sealed bet If this guys an ill cat... ill get him put down from ill nika a real vet We ain't so different, i'm new but your the mike tyson of the forum right You stay on the forum while ya girl calls me kid dynamite while she pulls on my iron, mike fuck it man Last edited by Lotto Smirk; 04-26-2013 at 04:43 PM. |
04-26-2013, 04:42 PM | #7 |
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lol props man, sorry about the impromptu'ness of it. Thats how I move though and you said quick lol you cool in my book
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04-30-2013, 10:30 PM | #9 |
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let the llama burst at lotto smirk, you need alotta work
put the nine, the four five, the tre five seven to em, given him that lotto work make his medulla oblongata jerk, I'll make you do that dance get stomped out they'll say I'm like a choreographer how I make a busta move that fast PERSONALLY THE OPENER WAS EXECUTED PERFECT AND THE SECOND WAS JUST MEAN CHARISMA. Vs Ya girls a slut, I said i was tryna put my kid to bed ya need to learn some respect but his idea of having kids...was flushed down the drain with a failed a paternity test THIS WAS THE HARDEST HITTING PUNCH OF THE BATTLE. Even tho I think lotto had the best punch here I have to go with consistency. Good jon tho for a 10 minute key. Vote CHEAYYHH |
05-06-2013, 04:45 AM | #10 |
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Had chyeahh. Not bad for a keystyle, I feel like Lotto came up dry on concepts and chyeahh hit pretty well with his name flip. Let me know if you want me to break it down further, I just felt like these were quick verses and deserved a quick vote/ can't quote on my phone well at all.
V/chyeahh less misses, harder concepts, smoother wording
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this was the lotto work line
vs a very badly worded paternity line I got chyeaah winning this
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I'm gonna have to go with Chyeahh in this one. He simply constructed his bars better. Lotto Smirk had a decent punch, but it was just simply forced. The fair is in.
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