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Join Date: Jul 2015
Posts: 1,803
Battle Record: 9-12
Champed - 1-2 Punch League
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I thought it was a pretty good verse. U had a good flow and rhyme scheme which made the verse seem slot cleaner. Couple of ur lines were good but you'll get better if u stick around.
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