Netcees - SMaSH 0-0 vs riffic 0-0

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SMaSH 0-0 vs riffic 0-0 - RIFFIC WINS

NBL Season 9

Due THURSDAY

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

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NO feeding
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@SMaSH @riffic

...SMaSH? He’ll be headin’ to the ground like an ostrich sleepin’
Once he caught this beatin’ that made Auschwitz look like hospice treatment
I’m bob and weavin’, you NetCees better stop your beefin’
‘Fore I leave your Best Actress de-Brie and make it Oscars season
With a glock I’m squeezin’; so many gun lines you’ll need a week to compile it
Tools blast that’ll do Smash worse than Jason Street in the pilot
‘Cause this is Being John Malkovich - got a clip full of baldheads
Think he Hard To Kill ‘til you see the Exit Wounds like a Steven Seagal spread
Think I can’t eat off these gun bars? Shoulda chose better food
This dude named himself the main thing women won’t let him do
So fuck it, I got nothing left to say to you
All your lines flat & a flatline will be the best shit that came from you

The scheme on those first few bars was pretty dope.
The Jason Street line was cool, Steven Seagal was alright, named himself the one thing women won't let him do was flames. Good verse my dude.

I thought it was a pretty good verse. U had a good flow and rhyme scheme which made the verse seem slot cleaner. Couple of ur lines were good but you'll get better if u stick around.