Netcees  

Go Back   Netcees > Vault > Archives > The Netcees archive > Netcees Battle League Season IX
Register FAQ Community Calendar Today's Posts Search

User Tag List

 
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Prev Previous Post   Next Post Next
Old 04-09-2016, 02:51 PM   #9
Adverse
low tide in serotonin bay
 
Adverse's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,752
Battle Record: 37-28


Champed
- GWL Picture Challenge
- Guerrilla Writing League
- Black August II

Rep Power: 15446146
Adverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant futureAdverse has a brilliant future
Default

Orc:
Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute
Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute
^ this a decent opener to me, nothing too fancy but alright.

Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam
Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene
^ haha dope to me

Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing
&&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion
^ lol alright

This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness
^ dope punch and nice set-up.

Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad
Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad
^ alright nice.

U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh
Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber
^ wasn't super great but it's okay.

Schaden:
All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards
bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours.
^ ehhhh okay opening

Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about
but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth.
^ wasn't a very hard hit to me.

Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear.
^ punch was cool set-up was just blah.

I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur
Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer.
^ decent decent to me

So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked
ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke.
^ i liked that.

Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean..
won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring.
^ That's a decent way to close as well.

Overall, no hate to either contestants because I thought this was a cool battle but I think Orc wins it pretty convincingly, better set-up and multies and for the simple fact that I just think his punches landed a bit harder, I thought Schaden had some good ones as well they just didn't get him the points to win, keep it going guys.

Vote - Orc
Adverse is offline  
 


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:13 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
User Alert System provided by Advanced User Tagging (Lite) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2025 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.
Google+