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#9 |
low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,752
Battle Record: 37-28
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Orc:
Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute ^ this a decent opener to me, nothing too fancy but alright. Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene ^ haha dope to me Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing &&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion ^ lol alright This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness ^ dope punch and nice set-up. Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad ^ alright nice. U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber ^ wasn't super great but it's okay. Schaden: All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours. ^ ehhhh okay opening Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth. ^ wasn't a very hard hit to me. Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear. ^ punch was cool set-up was just blah. I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer. ^ decent decent to me So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke. ^ i liked that. Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean.. won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring. ^ That's a decent way to close as well. Overall, no hate to either contestants because I thought this was a cool battle but I think Orc wins it pretty convincingly, better set-up and multies and for the simple fact that I just think his punches landed a bit harder, I thought Schaden had some good ones as well they just didn't get him the points to win, keep it going guys. Vote - Orc |
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