Championship Match: Orc 6-0 vs Schadenfreude 8-4 - ORC WINS

Orc · 04-04-2016, 06:05 AM

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@Schadenfreude

Schadenfreude · 04-04-2016, 02:26 PM

Regulation, 16.

Orc · 04-04-2016, 02:52 PM

Orc · 04-07-2016, 05:02 PM

@Schadenfreude, gonna need the ext

Schadenfreude · 04-07-2016, 05:02 PM

Cool w/ Me.

Orc · 04-08-2016, 08:18 PM

Please.

Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute
Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute
Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam
Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene
Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing
&&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion
This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness
Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad
Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad
U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh
Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber

AND STILLLLL
__________________

Schadenfreude · 04-08-2016, 08:43 PM

Lol..gtfoh

All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards
bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours.
Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about
but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth.
Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear.
I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur
Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer.
So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked
ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke.
Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean..
won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring.

...BODY.

SuckaFreeCashier · 04-09-2016, 11:44 AM

@Orc

Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute
Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute
Solid start, kinda simple but hit for me
Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam
Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene
This was fireeeee. Only criticism i could have is the vet stopping fiend being solely there for the added multi, but it reads funny, kinda like you're talking in limericks lol
Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing
&&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion
Punch was lost on me (personal stuff will for a bit i s'pose) but the rhyming / flow of this couplet was amazing
This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness
Really dope punch. Setup was a lil lackluster imo
Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad
Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad
Real nice. flow on point as well
U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh
Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber
Guessing hush is an uber driver... if that's the case the closer is pretty light. Uber punches been done to death, this one wasn't a clever enough play on it to be effective for me

@Schadenfreude

All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards
bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours.
Kinda light opening. Starting the second line with bar whore through the flow off for me
Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about
but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth.
Flow in this was really nice. personally not a fan of gay jokes (just usually aren't that funny) but this one specifically was all over the place.
Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear.
lmao. "slay and fill her there" come on man you can get a better setup than that! punch was hilarious tho
I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur
Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer.
By the end of this verse i think i'll have a "they're so bad they're good" realization with your setups. Really solid punch
So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked
ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke.
lmao
Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean..
won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring.
Solid closer, not crazy but nice play on a personal w/ a punch

Fun little battle here. Overall I have Orc taking it, thought he had cleaner writing and was more consistent throughout. Defo a style clash, shade a humor heavy guy so hits and misses come with the territory, but i thought your verse could have kept up if you worked a bit on some of your iffy setups. I don't know if ya'll have a science for how votes are supposed to go here, so lemme know if i need to change it to a different format or whatever

V/ Orc

Adverse · 04-09-2016, 02:51 PM

Orc:
Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute
Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute
^ this a decent opener to me, nothing too fancy but alright.

Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam
Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene
^ haha dope to me

Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing
&&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion
^ lol alright

This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness
^ dope punch and nice set-up.

Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad
Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad
^ alright nice.

U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh
Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber
^ wasn't super great but it's okay.

Schaden:
All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards
bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours.
^ ehhhh okay opening

Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about
but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth.
^ wasn't a very hard hit to me.

Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear.
^ punch was cool set-up was just blah.

I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur
Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer.
^ decent decent to me

So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked
ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke.
^ i liked that.

Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean..
won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring.
^ That's a decent way to close as well.

Overall, no hate to either contestants because I thought this was a cool battle but I think Orc wins it pretty convincingly, better set-up and multies and for the simple fact that I just think his punches landed a bit harder, I thought Schaden had some good ones as well they just didn't get him the points to win, keep it going guys.

Vote - Orc

Cashius · 04-09-2016, 07:00 PM

Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute
Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute
Ok...I feel like I see an "Arms" line in every battle I read.

Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam
Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene
I liked this.

Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing
&&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion
Nose/no's seems a bit stale to me.

This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness
Ok.

Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad
Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad
Ok.

U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh
Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber
Ok. Pretty clever. Never seen it.

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All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards
bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours.
Ok.

Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about
but u’re so bi it’s no surprised u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth.
For some reason this went hard to me. Simple but hit.

Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear.
Kinda liked this.

I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur
Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe
Not feeling this.

So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked
ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke.
Nah.

Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean..
won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring.
Not much behind this.

This was an ok battle. Orc was more constant with no real misses. I really liked the other guys lisp line but I gotta go with Orc here.

Orc.

Allen Knight · 04-09-2016, 11:39 PM

Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute
Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute
This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness
U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh
Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber

Vs

Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear.
I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur
Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer.

V/Orc, this was a cool battle, schad a decent verse but had some misses that hurt him like the opener an irish spring
are super played on him, the bars i did quote were nice...build a bear was dope.
orc had a real solid verse Blitzrieg & uber were fire an the opener was nice...props on the battle yah'll, good read.

Tic · 04-10-2016, 12:14 AM

Nazi salute, blitzkrieg, dead at the scene and Uber was cool. Nose/no's come on bro lol.

Vs

Lisp, build a bear and coming to America was ok.

Orc got this one with harder punches and more quotes. Not bad schad but a couple more misses than your opponent.

jilti · 04-10-2016, 12:24 AM

Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute
Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute
^nice
Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam
Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene
^seen pronounced dead lines before so nothing crazy but was relevent here because of his name
Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing
&&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion
^lol funny but dont pic on my boy tic
This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness
^just ok
Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad
Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad
^cool
U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh
Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber
^dope

Vs

All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards
bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours.
^ok opener
Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about
but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth.
^cool
Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear.
^dope. Lotb
I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur
Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer.
^nah
So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked
ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke.
^not feeling this
Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean..
won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring.
^no

V/orc

Saint · 04-10-2016, 06:27 AM

suicide squad, pronounced dead (old idea, but more relevant), blitzkrieg was ok to me

build a bear, faggots mouth (simple but cool personal) rose pedal almost..

Orc had the wording and smoothness.. schade did well there in that dept too, I felt his opener and closer was a bit stale.. Orcs miss was the nose line, imo..

So w/better highs, less misses and better executed lines i have Orc here.

Vote Orc.

Wanderer · 04-10-2016, 08:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orc

Please.

Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam
Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene

This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness

AND STILLLLL
__________________

Quote:

Originally Posted by Schadenfreude

Lol..gtfoh

Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear.

...BODY.

Only had time for the standouts from both. Pronounced dead at the scene was fire and lotb. Bomb with the quickness also dope. No real misses. Though suicide squad was blah and i wrote a nazi salute line before so wasn't feeling that. Best bar from Schad was the build a bear which was an amusing punch but set-up made it come off forced. Guess the bi line wasn't too bad but nothing special. Overall, I wasn't feeling much from Schad in terms of wording whereas Orc smashed outta the park with that. The champ generally just had harder punches and so he gets my vote in a win by a considerable margin

V/Orc

King · 04-10-2016, 10:51 AM

Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam
Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the s
This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quicknes

vs

Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear

ok battle. orc had the more consistent and more polished verse. pronounced was lotb easily.

vote orc.

04-04-2016, 06:05 AM	#1
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	Championship Match: Orc 6-0 vs Schadenfreude 8-4 - ORC WINS NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Schadenfreude

04-09-2016, 11:39 PM	#11
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber Vs Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear. I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer. V/Orc, this was a cool battle, schad a decent verse but had some misses that hurt him like the opener an irish spring are super played on him, the bars i did quote were nice...build a bear was dope. orc had a real solid verse Blitzrieg & uber were fire an the opener was nice...props on the battle yah'll, good read. Last edited by Allen Knight; 04-09-2016 at 11:44 PM.

04-10-2016, 12:14 AM	#12
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137909	Nazi salute, blitzkrieg, dead at the scene and Uber was cool. Nose/no's come on bro lol. Vs Lisp, build a bear and coming to America was ok. Orc got this one with harder punches and more quotes. Not bad schad but a couple more misses than your opponent. __________________ The Outsiders

04-04-2016, 02:26 PM	#2
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049084	Regulation, 16.

04-04-2016, 02:52 PM	#3
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393

04-07-2016, 05:02 PM	#4
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	@Schadenfreude, gonna need the ext

04-08-2016, 08:18 PM	#6
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	Please. Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing &&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber AND STILLLLL __________________

04-08-2016, 08:43 PM	#7
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049084	Lol..gtfoh All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours. Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth. Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear. I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer. So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke. Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean.. won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring. ...BODY.

04-09-2016, 11:44 AM	#8
SuckaFreeCashier Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2015 Location: St Louis Posts: 102 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 185208	@Orc Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute Solid start, kinda simple but hit for me Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene This was fireeeee. Only criticism i could have is the vet stopping fiend being solely there for the added multi, but it reads funny, kinda like you're talking in limericks lol Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing &&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion Punch was lost on me (personal stuff will for a bit i s'pose) but the rhyming / flow of this couplet was amazing This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness Really dope punch. Setup was a lil lackluster imo Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad Real nice. flow on point as well U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber Guessing hush is an uber driver... if that's the case the closer is pretty light. Uber punches been done to death, this one wasn't a clever enough play on it to be effective for me @Schadenfreude All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours. Kinda light opening. Starting the second line with bar whore through the flow off for me Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth. Flow in this was really nice. personally not a fan of gay jokes (just usually aren't that funny) but this one specifically was all over the place. Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear. lmao. "slay and fill her there" come on man you can get a better setup than that! punch was hilarious tho I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer. By the end of this verse i think i'll have a "they're so bad they're good" realization with your setups. Really solid punch So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke. lmao Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean.. won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring. Solid closer, not crazy but nice play on a personal w/ a punch Fun little battle here. Overall I have Orc taking it, thought he had cleaner writing and was more consistent throughout. Defo a style clash, shade a humor heavy guy so hits and misses come with the territory, but i thought your verse could have kept up if you worked a bit on some of your iffy setups. I don't know if ya'll have a science for how votes are supposed to go here, so lemme know if i need to change it to a different format or whatever V/ Orc

04-09-2016, 02:51 PM	#9
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Orc: Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute ^ this a decent opener to me, nothing too fancy but alright. Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene ^ haha dope to me Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing &&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion ^ lol alright This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness ^ dope punch and nice set-up. Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad ^ alright nice. U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber ^ wasn't super great but it's okay. Schaden: All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours. ^ ehhhh okay opening Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth. ^ wasn't a very hard hit to me. Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear. ^ punch was cool set-up was just blah. I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer. ^ decent decent to me So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke. ^ i liked that. Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean.. won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring. ^ That's a decent way to close as well. Overall, no hate to either contestants because I thought this was a cool battle but I think Orc wins it pretty convincingly, better set-up and multies and for the simple fact that I just think his punches landed a bit harder, I thought Schaden had some good ones as well they just didn't get him the points to win, keep it going guys. Vote - Orc

04-09-2016, 07:00 PM	#10
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute Ok...I feel like I see an "Arms" line in every battle I read. Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene I liked this. Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing &&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion Nose/no's seems a bit stale to me. This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness Ok. Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad Ok. U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber Ok. Pretty clever. Never seen it. Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 292 Battle Record: 12-5 All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours. Ok. Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about but u’re so bi it’s no surprised u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth. For some reason this went hard to me. Simple but hit. Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear. Kinda liked this. I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Not feeling this. So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke. Nah. Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean.. won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring. Not much behind this. This was an ok battle. Orc was more constant with no real misses. I really liked the other guys lisp line but I gotta go with Orc here. Orc.

04-10-2016, 12:24 AM	#13
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute ^nice Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene ^seen pronounced dead lines before so nothing crazy but was relevent here because of his name Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing &&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion ^lol funny but dont pic on my boy tic This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness ^just ok Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad ^cool U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber ^dope Vs All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours. ^ok opener Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth. ^cool Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear. ^dope. Lotb I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer. ^nah So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke. ^not feeling this Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean.. won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring. ^no V/orc

04-10-2016, 06:27 AM	#14
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	suicide squad, pronounced dead (old idea, but more relevant), blitzkrieg was ok to me build a bear, faggots mouth (simple but cool personal) rose pedal almost.. Orc had the wording and smoothness.. schade did well there in that dept too, I felt his opener and closer was a bit stale.. Orcs miss was the nose line, imo.. So w/better highs, less misses and better executed lines i have Orc here. Vote Orc.

04-10-2016, 10:51 AM	#16
King Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 253 Battle Record: 6-10 Rep Power: 1112905	Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the s This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quicknes vs Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear ok battle. orc had the more consistent and more polished verse. pronounced was lotb easily. vote orc.