Battle Arena Callout/Battle Request/Chat Thread

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Originally Posted by Adverse

I don't see the problem with his feed and I'm the one he voted against. if you guys got any constructive criticism I'll gladly take it, I'm trying to get better and I feel like my punches were bland. I'd like some pointers

Here's a more in depth look at one of ur bars

Love and hip hop do not conincide, end of discussion
So Tahiry won't be around when this Joe B gets shot down in public

So I'm not exactly sure how tahiry is pronounced, but I believe its ta hear he

So if this is correct then this will make sense.

I would have done something like (this gonna be super rough but ull get the idea)

nobody's fond of u, we should forever remove this twat altogether
Tahiry (ta hear he) won't be around could single handedly put the love n hip hop back together