TYSON vs SPLIT (Topical battle) - SPLIT WINS

Orc · 05-11-2013, 07:20 AM

spits verse was more reader friendly even tho if u looked at the structures it wudn't be plain to the naked eye. the verse itself was nice and very imagery driven. took a tone of longing but being too good to go back to the old girl kinda vibe. i dig it and can dig it. tyson went down a totally different route and had some nice standout lines. overall tyson flowed and used his multies cleaner than split whos end rhymes are still one syllable (stop that). i think in terms of writing quality and making me feel more as a reader Split had the edge, so yea vote Split

05-11-2013, 07:20 AM	#13
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