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![]() NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @jilti @Letterman
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Sent 10 to Orc
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Sent 40 to Orc
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Letterman from RB, welcome to my house..
ur in my backyard for an ambush that'll put me closer to a championship match next week i'll be on the Doorstep, same place ima leave ur family massacred at headshot. gonna suffer memory loss of this after i leave shrapnel inside but you'll always have bits n pieces of what happened in the back of your mind bury his body in a pile of dirt so detectives wont find it at first until a bum stumbles over Letters like Hush reciting a verse this lite work. watch my knife inserted thru the crease of this letter Manual get chopped up so bad they'll need instruction books to piece u together seen ur kids.. i'll kendo stick those buck-toothed bastards in the face staff gonna push their entire front row back like they were too close to the stage Last edited by jilti; 03-11-2016 at 03:21 AM. |
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LETTERMAN:
Tic - Better than you Unfuk - Better than you Junto - Better than you But now out of that whole generation, this guy's gotta be last Cuz your bars on paper?Plain.. So it's ironic you folded & couldn't fly thru your class Ur girl would make a great mother. So ill kill u to give that whore dick I'll take the gun & populate night, then go in ya bedroom to procreate with your chick I forever hold my piece. So if u hop in ya ride ill let the gun bust, fairy I'll leave a couple in da whip, when cans banging behind the car like "Just Married" Ya ratchet slut gave me head. That's the only thing that matters, bruv Cuz you only get poo hoes, but that bitch hits the balls harder than Albert does Internet thug. Name some real street shit you've done, son? We don't look at Jilti n see G in you, this nerd just spends all his time tryna become one |
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I had a full breakdown and my phone browser re@freshed
Jilti's first 2 I wasn't feeling. The last 3 were nice Vs Opener, just married (even tho I swear I heard or saw that somewhere), and pujols |
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jilti - consistent verse.. nice hits throughout
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Letterman. A strong showing as well - a little more complexity in the bars, but sometimes that detracted a bit more than added. The paper plane line is one example that in concept is pretty dope, but execution just made me admire the thought rather than reacted to it as a hard hit. And that Pujols line was realllly badddddd. lmao. Overall, I'm gonna go with jilti. That manual line was dope af.
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Jilti got it but letter had some nice shit |
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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The brutal imagery is dope asf, makes the punches heavier, still the wording can be smoother.
Honestly I've seen your concepts before, fresher/harsher flips would've helped, otherwise naw. Overall JILTI beasted in comparison to Letterman's drop. |
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Manual, back of your mind
from jilti & opener, populate letterman this was close imo, both had bars, i think jilti wins because of that manual line it was the best in the battle & he had some other solid lines like doorstep. letterman populate line was dope, i think jilti non quotes were better here. |
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A couple days ago in a suburb just outside of pittsburg, a family was having a backyard cookout when 2 men ambushed them, shooting and killing 5 family members on their porch as they were running back into the house
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Thank you. I didn't know that.
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Voted jilt off the manual line Letter was good to tho
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