Netcees - Jilti 1-0 Vs Letterman 1-1

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Jilti 1-0 Vs Letterman 1-1 - (Jilti wins)

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@jilti @Letterman

Letterman from RB, welcome to my house..

ur in my backyard for an ambush that'll put me closer to a championship match
next week i'll be on the Doorstep, same place ima leave ur family massacred at
headshot. gonna suffer memory loss of this after i leave shrapnel inside
but you'll always have bits n pieces of what happened in the back of your mind
bury his body in a pile of dirt so detectives wont find it at first
until a bum stumbles over Letters like Hush reciting a verse
this lite work. watch my knife inserted thru the crease of this letter
Manual get chopped up so bad they'll need instruction books to piece u together
seen ur kids.. i'll kendo stick those buck-toothed bastards in the face
staff gonna push their entire front row back like they were too close to the stage

LETTERMAN:

Quote:

Originally Posted by jilti (Post 571459)

Generation 3:

Tic Tac
Jilti
Unfuckwitable
Junto etc

Tic - Better than you
Unfuk - Better than you
Junto - Better than you

But now out of that whole generation, this guy's gotta be last
Cuz your bars on paper?Plain.. So it's ironic you folded & couldn't fly thru your class
Ur girl would make a great mother. So ill kill u to give that whore dick
I'll take the gun & populate night, then go in ya bedroom to procreate with your chick
I forever hold my piece. So if u hop in ya ride ill let the gun bust, fairy
I'll leave a couple in da whip, when cans banging behind the car like "Just Married"
Ya ratchet slut gave me head. That's the only thing that matters, bruv
Cuz you only get poo hoes, but that bitch hits the balls harder than Albert does
Internet thug. Name some real street shit you've done, son?
We don't look at Jilti n see G in you, this nerd just spends all his time tryna become one

I had a full breakdown and my phone browser re@freshed

Jilti's first 2 I wasn't feeling. The last 3 were nice

Vs

Opener, just married (even tho I swear I heard or saw that somewhere), and pujols

jilti - consistent verse.. nice hits throughout

Quote:

this lite work. watch my knife inserted thru the crease of this letter
Manual get chopped up so bad they'll need instruction books to piece u together

that's ridiculous. wow.

Letterman. A strong showing as well - a little more complexity in the bars, but sometimes that detracted a bit more than added. The paper plane line is one example that in concept is pretty dope, but execution just made me admire the thought rather than reacted to it as a hard hit. And that Pujols line was realllly badddddd. lmao.

Overall, I'm gonna go with jilti. That manual line was dope af.

Quote:

Originally Posted by jilti (Post 572710)

Letterman from RB, welcome to my house..

ur in my backyard for an ambush that'll put me closer to a championship match
next week i'll be on the Doorstep, same place ima leave ur family massacred at
--simple but ok I guess
headshot. gonna suffer memory loss of this after i leave shrapnel inside
but you'll always have bits n pieces of what happened in the back of your mind
---cool
bury his body in a pile of dirt so detectives wont find it at first
until a bum stumbles over Letters like Hush reciting a verse
---trash I see u tho fsggot
this lite work. watch my knife inserted thru the crease of this letter
Manual get chopped up so bad they'll need instruction books to piece u together
---that's cool
seen ur kids.. i'll kendo stick those buck-toothed bastards in the face
staff gonna push their entire front row back like they were too close to the stage
---nah

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orc (Post 572743)

LETTERMAN:

Tic - Better than you
Unfuk - Better than you
Junto - Better than you

But now out of that whole generation, this guy's gotta be last
Cuz your bars on paper?Plain.. So it's ironic you folded & couldn't fly thru your class
---angle is cool feels like it's slightly off target tho didn't land so hard
Ur girl would make a great mother. So ill kill u to give that whore dick
I'll take the gun & populate night, then go in ya bedroom to procreate with your chick
---ok wp don't really work both ways but it's creative
I forever hold my piece. So if u hop in ya ride ill let the gun bust, fairy
I'll leave a couple in da whip, when cans banging behind the car like "Just Married"
---kinda played but I guess u never seen it
Ya ratchet slut gave me head. That's the only thing that matters, bruv
Cuz you only get poo hoes, but that bitch hits the balls harder than Albert does
---lmao hell no
Internet thug. Name some real street shit you've done, son?
We don't look at Jilti n see G in you, this nerd just spends all his time tryna become one
--nah

Jilti got it but letter had some nice shit

Quote:

Originally Posted by jilti (Post 572710)

Opener, Shrapnel, Stumbles & Closer

The brutal imagery is dope asf, makes the punches heavier, still the wording can be smoother.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Letterman (Post 571882)

Just Married

Honestly I've seen your concepts before, fresher/harsher flips would've helped, otherwise naw.

Overall JILTI beasted in comparison to Letterman's drop.

Manual, back of your mind

from jilti

&

opener, populate

letterman

this was close imo, both had bars, i think jilti wins because of that manual line it was the best in the battle & he had some other solid lines like doorstep. letterman populate line was dope, i think jilti non quotes were better here.

Quote:

Originally Posted by jilti (Post 572710)

Letterman from RB, welcome to my house..

ur in my backyard for an ambush that'll put me closer to a championship match
next week i'll be on the Doorstep, same place ima leave ur family massacred at
didn't get this one.
headshot. gonna suffer memory loss of this after i leave shrapnel inside
but you'll always have bits n pieces of what happened in the back of your mind
Kinda dope.
bury his body in a pile of dirt so detectives wont find it at first
until a bum stumbles over Letters like Hush reciting a verse
Lol. Kinda harsh.
this lite work. watch my knife inserted thru the crease of this letter
Manual get chopped up so bad they'll need instruction books to piece u together
Lol. Nice.
seen ur kids.. i'll kendo stick those buck-toothed bastards in the face
staff gonna push their entire front row back like they were too close to the stage
Lmao. Great finish.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orc (Post 572743)

LETTERMAN:

Tic - Better than you
Unfuk - Better than you
Junto - Better than you

But now out of that whole generation, this guy's gotta be last
Cuz your bars on paper?Plain.. So it's ironic you folded & couldn't fly thru your class
Lol. Nice opener.
Ur girl would make a great mother. So ill kill u to give that whore dick
I'll take the gun & populate night, then go in ya bedroom to procreate with your chick
Forced, but funny.
I forever hold my piece. So if u hop in ya ride ill let the gun bust, fairy
I'll leave a couple in da whip, when cans banging behind the car like "Just Married"
Nice
Ya ratchet slut gave me head. That's the only thing that matters, bruv
Cuz you only get poo hoes, but that bitch hits the balls harder than Albert does
Stretch, but lol.
Internet thug. Name some real street shit you've done, son?
We don't look at Jilti n see G in you, this nerd just spends all his time tryna become one
Nice.

This was crazy close. Bar for bar, MVGT jilti for the haymakers. This is a revote. My bad, but I went back over the lines and I think jilti got this. I just didn't get his opener with doorstep reference.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vividlyvague (Post 573174)

A couple days ago in a suburb just outside of pittsburg, a family was having a backyard cookout when 2 men ambushed them, shooting and killing 5 family members on their porch as they were running back into the house

Quote:

Originally Posted by jilti (Post 573175)

Thank you. I didn't know that.

Voted jilt off the manual line Letter was good to tho