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Old 03-05-2016, 07:01 AM   #1
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LETTERMAN:


You drop dope on your site, but here it'll be average shit
So after Smoke bombs, he'll have to toss a few to escape the embarrassment
U gon be the one I bitch. Bet his death is slow
I'll make sure this guy fries with the metal like a Futurama episode
Them weak ass punches wont have us feelin shook
Your verse'll never burn, stein bears as much substance as that children's book
I'll make him beg for his life b4 I empty every shell
And have this fruit talking in front of a clip, like this was Veggie Tales
Cant stand to look at his own mug. He got some cruddy ass luck
If we see smoke and mirrors together, he's tryna disguise the fact he's ugly as fuck
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Old 03-05-2016, 01:45 PM   #2
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OG SMOKINSTEIN:



will break-up-letter- so bad I should've started my verse with dear john.
Cause we different speeds, you school zone, I'm autobahn.
--- I fux with the setup with a punch shit heavy
And the path he on,headshot, bullets roaming/roman his dome like the pantheon.
One shot miss, and clap his clavicle, now his collar stick up like the fonz
---that's fire


Niggas predicted you to win, but my bars are all heaters.
The lines I got in hand will make believers outta you palm readers.
---this is cool. Style wise it appeals to me
Chinese chopper Asian model like tela tequila
Give'em 5 bucks these cheap hot rounds aint little Cesar.
--- setup fire punch was straight played b. Super played
I can keystyle better than what u write, you not winning who u kidding.
Before this battle I pictured you dead, I'm Jude law in road to perdition.
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You drop dope on your site, but here it'll be average shit
So after Smoke bombs, he'll have to toss a few to escape the embarrassment
---nice kinda overworded on the punch tho
U gon be the one I bitch. Bet his death is slow
I'll make sure this guy fries with the metal like a Futurama episode
---nice
Them weak ass punches wont have us feelin shook
Your verse'll never burn, stein bears as much substance as that children's book
---dude no this isn't good
I'll make him beg for his life b4 I empty every shell
And have this fruit talking in front of a clip, like this was Veggie Tales
--eh almost man almost . If the veggie tales line was a setup to a more fire punch this could of been hot
Cant stand to look at his own mug. He got some cruddy ass luck
If we see smoke and mirrors together, he's tryna disguise the fact he's ugly as fuck
--/ kinda predictable and the wording wasn't so good bro


This shit dumb close
Hard to call

I feel like I wish y'all went more bars so I could have judged better


Letter had dope ideas and a more old school drawn out wording style
Og had smooth ass crips wording and it made his punches appeal to me more

But he had some bad concepts in a few spots

I could see either winning and I changed my mind like twice


Vote smoke


Preference went a long way here
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