Netcees - Letterman vs OG Smokenstein

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Letterman vs OG Smokenstein - LETTERMAN WINS

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@Letterman @Og smokinstein

I'm down for 10 @Letterman

Yo.. how long is the extension @Orc

OG SMOKINSTEIN:

will break-up-letter- so bad I should've started my verse with dear john.
Cause we different speeds, you school zone, I'm autobahn.
And the path he on,headshot, bullets roaming/roman his dome like the pantheon.
One shot miss, and clap his clavicle, now his collar stick up like the fonze.

Niggas predicted you to win, but my bars are all heaters.
The lines I got in hand will make believers outta you palm readers.
Chinese chopper Asian model like tela tequila
Give'em 5 bucks these cheap hot rounds aint little Cesar.

I can keystyle better than what u write, you not winning who u kidding.
Before this battle I pictured you dead, I'm Jude law in road to perdition.

LETTERMAN:

You drop dope on your site, but here it'll be average shit
So after Smoke bombs, he'll have to toss a few to escape the embarrassment
U gon be the one I bitch. Bet his death is slow
I'll make sure this guy fries with the metal like a Futurama episode
Them weak ass punches wont have us feelin shook
Your verse'll never burn, stein bears as much substance as that children's book
I'll make him beg for his life b4 I empty every shell
And have this fruit talking in front of a clip, like this was Veggie Tales
Cant stand to look at his own mug. He got some cruddy ass luck
If we see smoke and mirrors together, he's tryna disguise the fact he's ugly as fuck

@OG that lines in my hand palm reader shit was dope to me

pantheon could have been something but the wording let you down

rest I wasn't feeling too much tbc

Letterman actually had a few nice lines here, the smokebombs was a cool name play I hadn't seen done. Fry with the metal was a good concept, I hated the comma between Stein and bears even though I got it, that horrid comma ruined the shit for me man...

last four I could have done without if we're keeping it a buck

Letterman got it on the strength of those first four

although it seems like i've heard the fonze line before the first six for OG were killers then the cesars was played and wasnt feelin the ending.. first 4 from letterman were gully as fff then he came with veggie tales n that bear shit, clever but threw me off.. close but ima have to go with og on this one

vote og

Smokenstein
Opener is very simple.
You don't gotta give us both spellings of your wp - if the connection is there, we'll get it on our own. The collar bit is cool, but the roaming shit fucked me up.
Palm readers is an old concept.
Hot n Ready lines are old too.
Closer is alright.

vs.

Letterman
Letterman's opener is hot. Fuckin' imagery is hilarious.
Futurama is creative.
Bernstein bears is a cool concept.
Veggie Tales is ehhh.
Smoke and mirrors coulda been dope but you dropped the ball. Think more ferociously the next time cuz the concept coulda been dope.

Honestly, I think Letterman's opener crushed Smoke's entire verse. The imagery of a dude bombing and then throwing a smoke bomb down - perfection. Smoke had alotta tired concepts.

Vote -- Letterman

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orc (Post 571372)

OG SMOKINSTEIN:

will break-up-letter- so bad I should've started my verse with dear john.
Cause we different speeds, you school zone, I'm autobahn.
--- I fux with the setup with a punch shit heavy
And the path he on,headshot, bullets roaming/roman his dome like the pantheon.
One shot miss, and clap his clavicle, now his collar stick up like the fonz
---that's fire

Niggas predicted you to win, but my bars are all heaters.
The lines I got in hand will make believers outta you palm readers.
---this is cool. Style wise it appeals to me
Chinese chopper Asian model like tela tequila
Give'em 5 bucks these cheap hot rounds aint little Cesar.
--- setup fire punch was straight played b. Super played
I can keystyle better than what u write, you not winning who u kidding.
Before this battle I pictured you dead, I'm Jude law in road to perdition.
--nah

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orc (Post 571374)

LETTERMAN:

You drop dope on your site, but here it'll be average shit
So after Smoke bombs, he'll have to toss a few to escape the embarrassment
---nice kinda overworded on the punch tho
U gon be the one I bitch. Bet his death is slow
I'll make sure this guy fries with the metal like a Futurama episode
---nice
Them weak ass punches wont have us feelin shook
Your verse'll never burn, stein bears as much substance as that children's book
---dude no this isn't good
I'll make him beg for his life b4 I empty every shell
And have this fruit talking in front of a clip, like this was Veggie Tales
--eh almost man almost . If the veggie tales line was a setup to a more fire punch this could of been hot
Cant stand to look at his own mug. He got some cruddy ass luck
If we see smoke and mirrors together, he's tryna disguise the fact he's ugly as fuck
--/ kinda predictable and the wording wasn't so good bro

This shit dumb close
Hard to call

I feel like I wish y'all went more bars so I could have judged better

Letter had dope ideas and a more old school drawn out wording style
Og had smooth ass crips wording and it made his punches appeal to me more

But he had some bad concepts in a few spots

I could see either winning and I changed my mind like twice

Vote smoke

Preference went a long way here

Good battle here. Close like previously mentioned. Liked both verses alot. Fonze line was lotb. So close of a battle that i have to nitpick to pick a winner. The separation point for me was 2 bars from og that were more swag & flowish to me which were the autobahn and palm reader lines.

V/ letterman

I kinda wanna vote vote for og for them first 4. But 5 hot rounds was ehh and closer was recycled...

Letter had the first 2, then next two were ok concepts, fuck veggie tales lol.burn stein nahh..

Damn this is close..

My faves were the fonze, autobahn and smoke bomb, futurama
Palm reader cancelled out veggie tales
Closers cancelled out each other
5 hot rounds and bern stein two worst imo from each.. But the tila opener passed it, smoke shoulda made it a punch..

Fuck it, I give it to smoke v- smoke, by a cunt hair

Quote:

Originally Posted by Infiltration (Post 571559)

Closer was recycled? Proof?

And the path he on,headshot, bullets roaming/roman his dome like the pantheon.
One shot miss, and clap his clavicle, now his collar stick up like the fonze.
I can keystyle better than what u write, you not winning who u kidding.
Before this battle I pictured you dead, I'm Jude law in road to perdition.

Vs

You drop dope on your site, but here it'll be average shit
So after Smoke bombs, he'll have to toss a few to escape the embarrassment
Them weak ass punches wont have us feelin shook
Your verse'll never burn, stein bears as much substance as that children's book
I'll make him beg for his life b4 I empty every shell
And have this fruit talking in front of a clip, like this was Veggie Tales

v/letterman, this was a decent one both had some cool shit. but i think let was more
consistent overall & had Lotb w/ the opener that jawn was tough but i liked
ogs fonz line that was nice...props to both.

I got smokes opening 4 vs Lettermans middle 4.

off preference and a little more impact to me I gotta edge to smoke, but I can see it going either way

v-og smoke

4-4

uppinnn...im tryna throw up next week....vote.