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Old 05-09-2013, 09:34 PM   #1
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I think this was a good rhyming excercise. You definitely have a cool style....but i can't say a whole it didn't seem to have any other aim besides rhyming.

Maby its over my head idk but either way thats my two cents

Maby try a topical next
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