ZenLand Part II

GKillaZ · 05-09-2013, 08:13 PM

I like how you wrote this piece ... its really dope to look at. You flow pretty much perfect the whole way through , I think it starts off a bit better in the first half, but the second half way nice too. although now that I read this again.
Because it's hard to live in peace while we starve and live in streets,
God's arms in our reach, Pfft...I'd rather carve in a priest
And take his arm or limb at least when I'm charged on hennessey
Til the sun sets, but I ain't done yet then I target the ministries

thats real sick. real good piece man, keep dropping em'
8/10

05-09-2013, 08:13 PM	#36
GKillaZ Killin' G'z Join Date: May 2013 Location: CANADA Posts: 318 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 37	I like how you wrote this piece ... its really dope to look at. You flow pretty much perfect the whole way through , I think it starts off a bit better in the first half, but the second half way nice too. although now that I read this again. Because it's hard to live in peace while we starve and live in streets, God's arms in our reach, Pfft...I'd rather carve in a priest And take his arm or limb at least when I'm charged on hennessey Til the sun sets, but I ain't done yet then I target the ministries thats real sick. real good piece man, keep dropping em' 8/10 __________________ [SIGPIC]http://img2.imagetitan.com/img2/116185608/43/43_untitleddd.gif[/SIGPIC]