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03-01-2016, 11:45 AM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
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Evis...been awhile since I seen a verse of yours floating about around here...
this verse was refreshing you litter the verse with a couple witty one liners but then I come across this peep it, burried be the secret knowledge, i speak it demolish Phoenecians harnessing powers of Egypt. the walking hexagon, carbon being, 99 elements alkaline analyst shitting ash and volcanic sediments. ^^^ Those 2 points really stand out to me, they just come across so smooth. especially the latter, you never see anyone take a step beyond simpler ideas I feel like you shine in this collab & shows that you still have a particular set of skills dope work here... it’s the social conscious that’ll leave you unconscious Ya simple entendres leave me undaunted televised revolution, I'm Chris rock at the Oscars plus I practice Krav Maga on a bed of hot Lava ^^ CHHHYYEEAAAHHH...I love that shit, thats just a dope opener following Evis verse reminds me of some Wu Tang type ish here, really nice work following that scheme of yours Im surprised you get slept on as a writer it may be due to your discussion threads & battles but when you sit down and write a verse like this you showcase your versatility some braggadocio knowledge dropping pen work....nice shit overall this was a dope collab, I really enjoy how the blend of styles work together you both shine in your own way & it makes the read quick but memorable. nice work fellas
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