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Chyeahhh!!! 02-29-2016 12:33 PM

Enki & Enlil (Evis & Chyeahhh)
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjbHGe161Vs

Eviscerate

i'm God Sun, allow me to employ the resemblance
square-off with a sentence
masons observe the perfect points of my entrance.
6 neutrons 6 electrons 6 protons
not the beast, that's the melanin code i just spoke on.
peep it, burried be the secret knowledge, i speak it
demolish Phoenecians harnessing powers of Egypt.
slaying all with forked tounge, that's my recollection
rule with a rod of iron used for Correction not protection.
take a sip of vervain offer, Dr. Sebi is my doctor
purslane, iron in my veins, brain is made of copper
the walking hexagon, carbon being, 99 elements
alkaline analyst shitting ash and volcanic sediments.
young god with a gift, been like this since 1996
rose up from the slums with the mind of a scientist.
observin the world around me rotting at a rapid pace
duckin magistrates, fuckas tryina create a master race.
tv displays the shit, as we fire off into space with ships
i sit, blaze a spliff n read the chronicles of Operation Paperclip..

Chyeahhh!!!

it’s the social conscious that’ll leave you unconscious
Ya simple entendres leave me undaunted
televised revolution, I'm Chris rock at the Oscars
plus I practice Krav Maga on a bed of hot Lava
My focus is on optics! a moment for my sponsors
Eotech with the zoom lense that should’ve been an option on Contra
The flow is on bonkers
The best when I’m slick but to catch what I mitt u gotta be Gary Payton with a gauntlet
Ya’ll should be glad I’m tryna balance all my chakras
Cuz I’d show up with gloves and a mask like Phantom of the Opera
Tony Danza with stanzas, but Imma boss outside the margins
My quatrains got me feeling like the Nostradamus of my genre
A Law Abiding Citizen who aint plottin to blow up the congress
But I’d cast my vote for a carcass before I voted in the caucus
you should all be feelin nauseous
yah girl will make u her X man and come home with me when the Apocalypse is upon us

Darius Da Terrible 02-29-2016 04:53 PM

'i'm God Sun, allow me to employ the resemblance
square-off with a sentence
masons observe the perfect points of my entrance.
6 neutrons 6 electrons 6 protons
not the beast, that's the melanin code i just spoke"

ill ill ill scheme. nice from Evis.

"Ya’ll should be glad I’m tryna balance all my chakras
Cuz I’d show up with gloves and a mask like Phantom of the Opera
Tony Danza with stanzas, but Imma boss outside the margins
My quatrains got me feeling like the Nostradamus of my genre"

this hit for me from Cheeyah!! i don't really keep up enough to catch all the topical name shit tho, that's on me.

Stay up. It was really easy for me to rap this to the beat and catch the flow.

Pharaohs Army 02-29-2016 08:09 PM

my mynd got eviscerated
(compliment)

Mr. J 03-01-2016 11:45 AM

Evis...been awhile since I seen a verse of yours floating about around here...
this verse was refreshing you litter the verse with a couple witty one liners but then I come across this

peep it, burried be the secret knowledge, i speak it
demolish Phoenecians harnessing powers of Egypt.

the walking hexagon, carbon being, 99 elements
alkaline analyst shitting ash and volcanic sediments.
^^^
Those 2 points really stand out to me, they just come across so smooth.
especially the latter, you never see anyone take a step beyond simpler ideas
I feel like you shine in this collab & shows that you still have a particular set of skills
dope work here...


it’s the social conscious that’ll leave you unconscious
Ya simple entendres leave me undaunted
televised revolution, I'm Chris rock at the Oscars
plus I practice Krav Maga on a bed of hot Lava
^^
CHHHYYEEAAAHHH...I love that shit, thats just a dope opener following Evis verse
reminds me of some Wu Tang type ish here, really nice work following that scheme of yours
Im surprised you get slept on as a writer it may be due to your discussion threads & battles
but when you sit down and write a verse like this you showcase your versatility
some braggadocio knowledge dropping pen work....nice shit


overall this was a dope collab, I really enjoy how the blend of styles work together
you both shine in your own way & it makes the read quick but memorable.
nice work fellas

Eviscerate 03-01-2016 04:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. J (Post 570519)
overall this was a dope collab, I really enjoy how the blend of styles work together
you both shine in your own way & it makes the read quick but memorable.
nice work fellas

thanx G

Chyeahhh!!! 03-02-2016 03:31 PM

word thanx for the feed ya'll

Megacito 03-09-2016 02:11 PM

Amazing & Terrific

SHECK WES 03-14-2016 11:46 PM

This shit was live

Eŋg 03-15-2016 12:45 AM

'vis got chyea on this one

shit was on point either end though.

sral 03-15-2016 05:44 AM

i fucks with that phantom of the opera bar heavy yo

Darker Ego 11-04-2020 12:51 AM

My turn :)
Exterminate

I'm a demonic entity, let me express your demise
Glaring behind a Devilish devise
Quenching the eyes of heavenly vice to Perfectly Wise
Guy C.O./Geico, Progressive/pro G rest I.V., Northon
Something Massive rotten by god forgotten, I'm flying Cotton
Dark gas's entrapped, In auras, An excellent Carcass,
Merging Messiah's aligning the Charkras behind Malevolent Mantras
Preying serpent wrapping humans, its an Obsession
A Segregation, for the Planet's eradication not Salvation Oh Redemption
Quenching the soul with fresh plasma, Satan a Sailor
Dying Wailer, Shattering remainder, Trail by a Sacred Tailor
The binding Megatron, Pestilence, with more than 90 Regiments
Mutated creature with Sentiments escaping Shady Satanic Experiments
Blessed hologram Divinely made to hypnotize, Since Birth
Wine thats been aging, Day by Day I synthesize to split Earth
Before it burns in the masses to Templar Knights
I return with glasses to Shred your Lights
See you blasting lead outlasting Secular Fights

Chyeahhh!!! 11-23-2020 10:22 PM

to God be the glory, all praises and honors
shoulda gotten advice before you did this, they'd all say that you're goner
shame on you for tryna to flex against this exorcist who's heaven sent
sniping with alchemy from a balcony, typa smith N' iron you shouldn't mix or metal with
put a skull clamp on your Temple... of Set, you're the simplest of threats
Michael Aquino died and this is how you resolve your issues, I guess*shrugs*
you performing candle lit rituals with other men in the dark and blood on the walls
envoking entities talkin bout, "please come inside me" nah, none of that sounds funny at all
ya style is all "insert random occultist reference here, smart sounding book quote goes there"
sounds super ficial, only thing missing is the yellow cape, spandex, and the Space Ghost stare
soon as you blink I'mma snatch ya, have yah fam thinking your raptured
looking for validity online and got it all wrong, please re-enter your captcha
the GOAT had to come do battle with baphomet, no go start seeking God
Jesus game me power reduce demons to a fraction, because possession is 9/10's of the law

ACTIVATE SELF 11-26-2020 12:40 PM

I’m not gonna lie. There was a time where the whole Anunnaki, Zacharias Hitchens, and Malachi York stuff seemed mildly plausible, yet wildly fascinating. Fortunately, at least, I’d like to think, that I’m on a completely different level of innerstanding nowadays. But ehhh. Maybe not.


Quote:

Eviscerate

i'm God Sun, allow me to employ the resemblance
square-off with a sentence
masons observe the perfect points of my entrance.
6 neutrons 6 electrons 6 protons
not the beast, that's the melanin code i just spoke on.
Stardust, carbon, melanin, supreme mathematics. Dope.

Quote:

peep it, burried be the secret knowledge, i speak it
demolish Phoenecians harnessing powers of Egypt.
slaying all with forked tounge, that's my recollection
rule with a rod of iron used for Correction not protection.
take a sip of vervain offer, Dr. Sebi is my doctor
purslane, iron in my veins, brain is made of copper
the walking hexagon, carbon being, 99 elements
alkaline analyst shitting ash and volcanic sediments.
young god with a gift, been like this since 1996
rose up from the slums with the mind of a scientist.
observin the world around me rotting at a rapid pace
duckin magistrates, fuckas tryina create a master race.
tv displays the shit, as we fire off into space with ships
i sit, blaze a spliff n read the chronicles of Operation Paperclip..
Ahhh yeah, this was pretty dope on some conscious awareness, swaggy, confident, gritty rap type shit. I could follow it all. I dug it.

Quote:

Chyeahhh!!!

it’s the social conscious that’ll leave you unconscious
Ya simple entendres leave me undaunted
televised revolution, I'm Chris rock at the Oscars
plus I practice Krav Maga on a bed of hot Lava
Nasty.

Quote:

My focus is on optics! a moment for my sponsors
Eotech with the zoom lense that should’ve been an option on Contra
The flow is on bonkers
The best when I’m slick but to catch what I mitt u gotta be Gary Payton with a gauntlet
Ya’ll should be glad I’m tryna balance all my chakras
Cuz I’d show up with gloves and a mask like Phantom of the Opera
Downright filthy.

Quote:

Tony Danza with stanzas, but Imma boss outside the margins
My quatrains got me feeling like the Nostradamus of my genre
A Law Abiding Citizen who aint plottin to blow up the congress
But I’d cast my vote for a carcass before I voted in the caucus
you should all be feelin nauseous
yah girl will make u her X man and come home with me when the Apocalypse is upon us
Solid. I’m guessing you dropped this around the time the movie came out, huh?


Dope shit overall. You both made it look too easy.

Hush 11-26-2020 02:08 PM

Evic killed this shit

Hush 11-26-2020 02:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Darker Ego (Post 791369)
My turn :)
Exterminate

I'm a demonic entity, let me express your demise
Glaring behind a Devilish devise
Quenching the eyes of heavenly vice to Perfectly Wise
Guy C.O./Geico, Progressive/pro G rest I.V., Northon
Something Massive rotten by god forgotten, I'm flying Cotton
Dark gas's entrapped, In auras, An excellent Carcass,
Merging Messiah's aligning the Charkras behind Malevolent Mantras
Preying serpent wrapping humans, its an Obsession
A Segregation, for the Planet's eradication not Salvation Oh Redemption
Quenching the soul with fresh plasma, Satan a Sailor
Dying Wailer, Shattering remainder, Trail by a Sacred Tailor
The binding Megatron, Pestilence, with more than 90 Regiments
Mutated creature with Sentiments escaping Shady Satanic Experiments
Blessed hologram Divinely made to hypnotize, Since Birth
Wine thats been aging, Day by Day I synthesize to split Earth
Before it burns in the masses to Templar Knights
I return with glasses to Shred your Lights
See you blasting lead outlasting Secular Fights


Get this trash the foh


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