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Old 02-28-2016, 11:18 AM   #4
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But there were moralists who more or less besmirched his design
They thought it a merciless crime to trick a person’s mind with circuits and wires
But let the purists conspire, he thought, they all beat the same drum
Cyborg or life form: if you attain love, who cares where it came from?


IMO 2nd stanza is your best here, and this is the OM verse of the month if we still doing that..
but did you already win award for the origins of this? if so I guess no need to double down. whatever fuck off bro. i'm a little bit thunderstruck from parts of this.

I'm way overgeneralizing here, but I've noticed a similar style from you and at least 3 or 4 other people here. I'll have to try it some time; wish me luck.
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