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05-09-2013, 01:24 PM
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Arm the Homeless
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,102
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Good short piece here. Favorite line was the moniker line. I did feel it fell off though as you used to many 'ends' rhymes. I don't like reading the same word in a rhyme over and over. Idk maybe that's just me. But all in all good piece man. Keep droppin.
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