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Old 11-21-2015, 04:25 PM   #1
Lotto Smirk
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Dude, find a shrink, coz your childish rhyme schemes are just mild and weak,
S’freud, you couldn’t craft a gun-bar from Neighbours wildest dreams.
Mods please! Time to send that fag Chamber in, for the kiss of death,
The way Shards getting smoked in this battle, it’s clear as crystal, Meth.

vs

Keep a 100 rounds in the S.A.W, that’ll chop ya limbs..
Alias “moviemaker”, when I shoot Plot, point blank ..like I forgot the film.
Easy play, but there’s no intriguing story in dispelling this gay
shit, the only reason the Plot would even thicken s’cause corpses swell w/ decay

I had it pretty even in quotes but had schade w/ better misses and his hits better thought plot had an alright verse first one I've seen of him that's made me notice shame schade was better here

V/ schade
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Old 11-21-2015, 05:48 PM   #2
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1st guys verse-- looked real polished, coco crisp wording. Sensitive material was sick. Crystal meth was line of the battle. Closer is either a banger or nothing. Frankly it was nothing to me because I don't say howitzer in the way you frames the line


Second guy--plot thicken was illy. The rest was just too sloppy and non hitting. It looked bad in comparison to how tight the rhyme scheme was on the other guys verse

Vote-- first guy by more quotables and less lows
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