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10-12-2015, 02:11 AM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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I'll fuckin' spring from beyond it and leave you bludgeoned to death
skeletal structures get crushed whenever I'm touchin' the pen ^^^^ I didnt like how you set this up, I get the idea you went for... but nah, it just felt weird and made me feel like a dirty whore for liking this but you had some enjoyable concepts that made me crack a smile the ending section with the cement cold buildup was pretty cool enjoyable piece, keep writing...
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