Reserve Battle: Greed vs Mr. J - GREED WINS

Junto · 08-21-2015, 03:38 AM

Fuck this puppet, this faggot ain't speakin' on shit let him clench his lips harder
"It's over" before it started, if he could order a rimjob. he'd want the 2000 Vince Carter
damn next level shit... wording was off man but the concept is crazy, I fuck wit it
all I'm thinkin' is how many times he gon' flip that avatar I sense the simplicity in you
one punch you'll get 8, puttin' you on your back quicker than an infinity symbol..
this somethin I seen before... real predictable
'Greed" tryna make it sound like you makin' money off text, that fame is rare..
but I understand why you stand by that logic, you really don't have change to spare
cool idea, not bad. the executions not there to me though
you couldn't spend a quarter on a gumball machine without it weighing your conscience
that makes me question how you chopping up rocks with the razors you found while staying at your moms crib
ha ... long, but not bad
either way I forget this battle happening so like your girl on my lap I'm bout to ounce
you winning here is classic, but it's always going to be reasonable without the doubt
saw what u tryna go for but didn't tie it together right... wording hurt u a lot homie

vs.

I call the shots, if u dont think its fair, draw
Everyone already knows u Mistah J.. AIR BALL
this was fresh... unorthodox wording but hit nice
Lol. Whining about dead man but ima split yo neck sideways
U such a baby joker u gon be considered knocked the fuck out by next friday
haha yo I like this too
Sipping cosmos outta two straws, ur lifestyle fuckin wrong
Bf slips u that date rape the only time ur man poem something strong
creative shit... nothin wild but solid
As far as writing prestige this faggots is fucking low
Calling yourself the clown prince wont ever raise your status as a juggalo
okay... coulda been executed better
U are the joke. It seems you dont understand the issue
Theres a big difference between the world laughing at you and with you
tired concept to me, but works a little better for the personal aspect

first off props to both for puttin on in Reserves cuz this was quality shit
I don't think no one got Mr J first reference but the rimjob / Carter dunk idea dope as hell
Aside from that he had a couple others I liked but wording was KILLIN em throughout
Even on the opener I think that's why people missin it..... but the concepts were solid
8 infinity didn't work for me though, just seen the play before. & closer too sloppy
Opener nameplay from Greed was smooth... one a them 'so simple but works perfect' to me
Baby joker heat, good reference. Poem was a creative play... fell of a little bit after...
But overall a nice verse from Greed & a little more consistent throughout, so got this one.

good shit

V/ Greed

08-21-2015, 03:38 AM	#1
Junto The Founder Join Date: Dec 2014 Posts: 827 Battle Record: 30-11 Accomplishments - Shadow Pic Roast Champed - Key Grand Prix 3 - NBL Season 8 Rep Power: 11766208	Fuck this puppet, this faggot ain't speakin' on shit let him clench his lips harder "It's over" before it started, if he could order a rimjob. he'd want the 2000 Vince Carter damn next level shit... wording was off man but the concept is crazy, I fuck wit it all I'm thinkin' is how many times he gon' flip that avatar I sense the simplicity in you one punch you'll get 8, puttin' you on your back quicker than an infinity symbol.. this somethin I seen before... real predictable 'Greed" tryna make it sound like you makin' money off text, that fame is rare.. but I understand why you stand by that logic, you really don't have change to spare cool idea, not bad. the executions not there to me though you couldn't spend a quarter on a gumball machine without it weighing your conscience that makes me question how you chopping up rocks with the razors you found while staying at your moms crib ha ... long, but not bad either way I forget this battle happening so like your girl on my lap I'm bout to ounce you winning here is classic, but it's always going to be reasonable without the doubt saw what u tryna go for but didn't tie it together right... wording hurt u a lot homie vs. I call the shots, if u dont think its fair, draw Everyone already knows u Mistah J.. AIR BALL this was fresh... unorthodox wording but hit nice Lol. Whining about dead man but ima split yo neck sideways U such a baby joker u gon be considered knocked the fuck out by next friday haha yo I like this too Sipping cosmos outta two straws, ur lifestyle fuckin wrong Bf slips u that date rape the only time ur man poem something strong creative shit... nothin wild but solid As far as writing prestige this faggots is fucking low Calling yourself the clown prince wont ever raise your status as a juggalo okay... coulda been executed better U are the joke. It seems you dont understand the issue Theres a big difference between the world laughing at you and with you tired concept to me, but works a little better for the personal aspect first off props to both for puttin on in Reserves cuz this was quality shit I don't think no one got Mr J first reference but the rimjob / Carter dunk idea dope as hell Aside from that he had a couple others I liked but wording was KILLIN em throughout Even on the opener I think that's why people missin it..... but the concepts were solid 8 infinity didn't work for me though, just seen the play before. & closer too sloppy Opener nameplay from Greed was smooth... one a them 'so simple but works perfect' to me Baby joker heat, good reference. Poem was a creative play... fell of a little bit after... But overall a nice verse from Greed & a little more consistent throughout, so got this one. good shit V/ Greed