08-06-2015, 07:35 PM | #1 |
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RND2. Cred vs Destroyer {Cred wins}
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08-10-2015, 05:23 PM | #2 |
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got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish do the math, dude got no bars & a crew that can't save him cuz even when u SS, the situation... well, the outlook still remains grim I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer |
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found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint |
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08-11-2015, 06:57 AM | #4 |
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got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish cool do the math, dude got no bars & a crew that can't save him cuz even when u SS, the situation... well, the outlook still remains grim decent I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo nice peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd okay cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer okay decent verse, some of the lines sounded like they had personals i wouldn't understand but the flow was pretty good which made the read enjoyable v found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch okay u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job cool if he works at a warehouse - if he doesn't weak. fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house eh weak plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap cool chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint decent decent verse also - some of the set up lines were lacking a bit which threw off the flow for me - but decent stuff. vote - destroyer - overall i enjoyed his verse more. both decent though - stay up. |
08-11-2015, 08:32 AM | #5 |
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Weird ass opener lol. Ss was nice Cbs one eye aint gon work for me. No originality Didnt like semisacred Amen/prayer lines r done to death Vs Cred. Rocky was ok Dead at squared up boxes Didnt like the weed drought line Fetty wap was good. I was gonna use a dread line Change paint was crazy. Vote cred: Des u started off strong, but slightly fizzled out. Cred, u only had one wack bar. This was damn near food imo |
08-11-2015, 04:59 PM | #6 |
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got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish - mild do the math, dude got no bars & a crew that can't save him cuz even when u SS, the situation... well, the outlook still remains grim - impact killed cause of wording man. could have been harsher w/ this bro I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo - dece peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd - this had sooooo much potential but you fell short bro, shy of being a gawd isn't much of an insult bro cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer - seen these amen/prayer plays done on me a thousand times man, so this was kind of stale to me vs found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch - wordy but dece u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job - simple/basic but straight forward - nothing wavy fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house - this was tough but the wording killed the potential - the whole "and if you don't pay" made it mild. should have worded as if he hasn't paid so you going to run up an lcean house. would have been more effective imo plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap - mild chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint - this was tough Cred got the edge here - misses were a taddddddd bit better. des struggle to word his concepts properly in a more effective manner |
08-11-2015, 11:36 PM | #7 |
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I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro
so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo ---simple yet effective peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd ----cool concept but I didn't like the execution. Coulda been flipped better imho cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer ---nice personal but amen/prayer was too predictable. Shoulda flipped this one too I got the same problem with this verse as I have with all ur verses, u shoulda took the time to flip the lines instead of posting the first one u think up. Still a decent verse but it coulda been oh so much better. Vs. found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch ----nice all the way around bruh u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job ---nice personal I didnt quote made/clean house and behr/paint the walls cause I just seen those concepts used somewhere, they were good flips tho. Overall I got des with three quotes vs creds two but des's were mediocre due to wording whereas creds were nice. Both were consistent but I think cred was more consistent even tho I didn't quote two of his lines that were OK. Good battle. V. Cred |
08-12-2015, 01:15 AM | #8 |
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got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer vs u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint 2 cool verses here the CBS line hurt des imo its been done plenty times in text battles and rap songs alike couldnt digg it here, the Amen line seemed like it was used but the spin to it made it heat to me it was def nice spin on a personal, the no credito was solid too, the fetty wap bar had me laughin and behr arms was dope... one got this by the extra quote and the others bad miss helped solidify the vote her for me. v/Cred
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peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds
that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd this is cool to me cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer old connection but a few points for being relevant fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint Both cool man shit I gotta go des cause the personal shit hit harder to me I'm 99% certain des doesn't work in a warehouse or anything like that so squared up is dull to me... could see it go either way but I'm a fan of personals so v/des |
08-12-2015, 09:41 PM | #10 |
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got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish Lmao do the math, dude got no bars & a crew that can't save him cuz even when u SS, the situation... well, the outlook still remains grim Nice wp I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo This is crazy played lol peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd Missed this on first read...semi say cred...nother nice wp cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer Eh ok LET ME TALK MY SHIT! This is optional? found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch Nah u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job He well known tmobile salesman....flip is played anyways fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house This is ok....played shit w dope wording plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap Lol this is dope chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint Eh Cred wording as ok....more misses then I'm used to from him....had sum old and or boring shit I didn't love....des had sum dope wordplays that took me a wording as ND read thru to grab like the u ss/ u assess an the semi say cred/semi sacred....thought they were worded crisp w the punch landing clean too. Des connected more for me on this one. V des |
08-13-2015, 09:01 AM | #11 |
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got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer assess wp was hot too, but u fumbled execution vs found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint I think Cred had lotb with the made man bar, but Des suprised me here and had the consistency he usually lacks. I think Des put the extra work in here and it showed off. I was rooting for Cred but I think Des got the upper hand here. v/Destro
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08-13-2015, 01:40 PM | #12 |
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Opener, uss , cbs n closer
Vs Maid nigga, one id, n closer Good bars in this match I enjoyed the read but got des on quotes 4-3 so he gets the W here imo.. Almost lije creds opener but iunno not enuff to quote, yeah but there u have it Des |
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08-13-2015, 05:28 PM | #15 |
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Honestly, I cant even lie, a lot of Destro's shit was bland to me. I just didnt feel like a whole lot hit or delivered anything. He had a couple ideas the SS shit in particular off bat that really could have been something nice.. but ultimately it lost steam or wasnt that interesting to me. I dunno. Maybe i missed some shit, but I had cred taking this one fairly comfortably with like 3-4 lines i enjoyed more. The opener and maid nigga lines here were enough for the win though, his whole wording and delivery helps even his not-as-good lines come off as nice where Des ha the opposite effect here... even his okayish ideas were never developed beyond that because of bad wording/delivery.
just calling it as i see it.
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08-13-2015, 08:10 PM | #16 |
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-I've got USS and CBS vs Fetty Wap and Behr arms (I've seen one a little better but this was still pretty decent). Creds delivery was better imo. Misses included. They hit harder the way they come off. Even in quotes but I'm giving the nod to Cred for better misses.
V/Cred
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got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer vs fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap V/des, cool battle,....creds fetty line was nice but i felt he he had more misses.. des had a pretty consistent verse an one more quote imo...props to both. |
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Still tied lol
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08-14-2015, 08:06 AM | #20 |
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got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish Eh do the math, dude got no bars & a crew that can't save him cuz even when u SS, the situation... well, the outlook still remains grim Eh I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo Played peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd Sick cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer Wording cool. Punch was whatever. found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch Too wordy u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job Terrible fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house This cool plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap Reaching chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint Solid If i didnt get a line fuck you suck a dick. V cred 2-1 in quotes |
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