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Victor. 08-06-2015 07:35 PM

RND2. Cred vs Destroyer {Cred wins}
 
Battle Arena Tournament

@Cred @Destroyer

Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due MONDAY,
    August 10th 2015 11:59 PM PST.
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Destroyer 08-10-2015 05:23 PM

got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish
do the math, dude got no bars & a crew that can't save him
cuz even when u SS, the situation... well, the outlook still remains grim
I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro
so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo
peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds
that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd
cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there
cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer

Cred 08-10-2015 06:00 PM

LET ME TALK MY SHIT!


Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer (Post 514937)
may skip V tho
I'll cry at least twice too
ending of 2, and 4.
oh, y'all don't cry when you watch rocky?
fucking animals.



found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid
u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch
u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop
the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job
fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought
ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house
plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not
cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap
chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim
wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint

Ruck 08-11-2015 06:57 AM

got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish
cool
do the math, dude got no bars & a crew that can't save him
cuz even when u SS, the situation... well, the outlook still remains grim
decent
I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro
so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo
nice
peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds
that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd
okay
cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there
cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer
okay

decent verse, some of the lines sounded like they had personals i wouldn't understand but the flow was pretty good which made the read enjoyable

v

found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid
u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch
okay
u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop
the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job
cool if he works at a warehouse - if he doesn't weak.
fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought
ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house
eh weak
plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not
cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap
cool
chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim
wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint
decent

decent verse also - some of the set up lines were lacking a bit which threw off the flow for me - but decent stuff.

vote - destroyer - overall i enjoyed his verse more. both decent though - stay up.

joog 08-11-2015 08:32 AM

Des:
Weird ass opener lol.
Ss was nice
Cbs one eye aint gon work for me. No originality
Didnt like semisacred
Amen/prayer lines r done to death

Vs

Cred.
Rocky was ok
Dead at squared up boxes
Didnt like the weed drought line
Fetty wap was good. I was gonna use a dread line
Change paint was crazy.


Vote cred:
Des u started off strong, but slightly fizzled out.
Cred, u only had one wack bar. This was damn near food imo

Amen. 08-11-2015 04:59 PM

got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish
- mild
do the math, dude got no bars & a crew that can't save him
cuz even when u SS, the situation... well, the outlook still remains grim
- impact killed cause of wording man. could have been harsher w/ this bro
I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro
so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo
- dece
peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds
that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd
- this had sooooo much potential but you fell short bro, shy of being a gawd isn't much of an insult bro
cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there
cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer
- seen these amen/prayer plays done on me a thousand times man, so this was kind of stale to me

vs

found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid
u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch
- wordy but dece
u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop
the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job
- simple/basic but straight forward - nothing wavy
fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought
ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house
- this was tough but the wording killed the potential - the whole "and if you don't pay" made it mild. should have worded as if he hasn't paid so you going to run up an lcean house. would have been more effective imo
plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not
cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap
- mild
chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim
wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint
- this was tough

Cred got the edge here - misses were a taddddddd bit better. des struggle to word his concepts properly in a more effective manner

Useless 08-11-2015 11:36 PM

I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro
so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo
---simple yet effective
peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds
that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd
----cool concept but I didn't like the execution. Coulda been flipped better imho
cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there
cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer
---nice personal but amen/prayer was too predictable. Shoulda flipped this one too

I got the same problem with this verse as I have with all ur verses, u shoulda took the time to flip the lines instead of posting the first one u think up. Still a decent verse but it coulda been oh so much better.

Vs.

found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid
u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch
----nice all the way around bruh
u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop
the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job
---nice personal

I didnt quote made/clean house and behr/paint the walls cause I just seen those concepts used somewhere, they were good flips tho.

Overall I got des with three quotes vs creds two but des's were mediocre due to wording whereas creds were nice. Both were consistent but I think cred was more consistent even tho I didn't quote two of his lines that were OK. Good battle.

V. Cred

Unfukwitable 08-12-2015 01:15 AM

got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish
cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there
cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer

vs

u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop
the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job
plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not
cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap
chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim
wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint


2 cool verses here the CBS line hurt des imo its been done plenty times in text battles and rap songs alike couldnt digg it here, the Amen line seemed like it was used but the spin to it made it heat to me it was def nice spin on a personal, the no credito was solid too, the fetty wap bar had me laughin and behr arms was dope... one got this by the extra quote and the others bad miss helped solidify the vote her for me. v/Cred

Sharp 08-12-2015 07:52 PM

peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds
that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd
this is cool to me
cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there
cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer
old connection but a few points for being relevant




fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought
ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house
chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim
wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint
Both cool


man shit

I gotta go des cause the personal shit hit harder to me

I'm 99% certain des doesn't work in a warehouse or anything like that so squared up is dull to me... could see it go either way but I'm a fan of personals so

v/des

Ghost1 08-12-2015 09:41 PM

got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish

Lmao

do the math, dude got no bars & a crew that can't save him
cuz even when u SS, the situation... well, the outlook still remains grim

Nice wp

I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro
so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo

This is crazy played lol

peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds
that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd

Missed this on first read...semi say cred...nother nice wp

cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there
cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer

Eh ok



LET ME TALK MY SHIT!

This is optional?







found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid
u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch

Nah

u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop
the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job

He well known tmobile salesman....flip is played anyways

fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought
ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house

This is ok....played shit w dope wording

plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not
cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap

Lol this is dope

chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim
wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint

Eh



Cred wording as ok....more misses then I'm used to from him....had sum old and or boring shit I didn't love....des had sum dope wordplays that took me a wording as ND read thru to grab like the u ss/ u assess an the semi say cred/semi sacred....thought they were worded crisp w the punch landing clean too. Des connected more for me on this one.

V des

Victor. 08-13-2015 09:01 AM

got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish
peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds
that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd
cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there
cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer


assess wp was hot too, but u fumbled execution


vs

found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid
u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch
fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought
ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house
chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim
wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint



I think Cred had lotb with the made man bar, but Des suprised me here and had the consistency he usually lacks. I think Des put the extra work in here and it showed off. I was rooting for Cred but I think Des got the upper hand here.

v/Destro

Hush 08-13-2015 01:40 PM

4-4 must win by 2 votes

Bust 08-13-2015 04:49 PM

Opener, uss , cbs n closer


Vs

Maid nigga, one id, n closer

Good bars in this match I enjoyed the read but got des on quotes 4-3 so he gets the W here imo.. Almost lije creds opener but iunno not enuff to quote, yeah but there u have it

Des

Victor. 08-13-2015 05:18 PM

Victor., @Ace*, @Allen Knight*, @anime_boners, @asylum, Bags, @Batty, @Bust, @Chill Phil, @Chyeahhh!!!, dead man, Destroyer, @Dr Dog, dull boy, @Fart*, @Flo Real*, Godcomplex, Hush, @ill nik-A, @Infiltration, @jilti*, @Killing Spree, @Knucklehead, Magnum Force, MMLP, Nigma, @Orc*, Remy LeBeau, @Ruck, Sharp, @sraL, @Strikta, @Tic, Ullr, Unfukwitable, @Vulgar, Wise Wiggles, @Witty*, @YDK, Zelphish


Help us decide this battle please.

sral 08-13-2015 05:28 PM

Honestly, I cant even lie, a lot of Destro's shit was bland to me. I just didnt feel like a whole lot hit or delivered anything. He had a couple ideas the SS shit in particular off bat that really could have been something nice.. but ultimately it lost steam or wasnt that interesting to me. I dunno. Maybe i missed some shit, but I had cred taking this one fairly comfortably with like 3-4 lines i enjoyed more. The opener and maid nigga lines here were enough for the win though, his whole wording and delivery helps even his not-as-good lines come off as nice where Des ha the opposite effect here... even his okayish ideas were never developed beyond that because of bad wording/delivery.

just calling it as i see it.

Bash 08-13-2015 08:10 PM

-I've got USS and CBS vs Fetty Wap and Behr arms (I've seen one a little better but this was still pretty decent). Creds delivery was better imo. Misses included. They hit harder the way they come off. Even in quotes but I'm giving the nod to Cred for better misses.

V/Cred

Allen Knight 08-14-2015 12:07 AM

got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish
peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds
that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd
cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there
cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer


vs


fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought
ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house
plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not
cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap



V/des, cool battle,....creds fetty line was nice but i felt he he had more misses..
des had a pretty consistent verse an one more quote imo...props to both.

Ruck 08-14-2015 02:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Victor. (Post 519754)

Help us decide this battle please.

I voted in this..

Hush 08-14-2015 07:39 AM

Still tied lol

Greed 08-14-2015 08:06 AM

got loot, chico. it's like I make salad the way I'm tearin lettuce
but when u hear 'no credito,' it's not cuz u n strik share a fetish
Eh

do the math, dude got no bars & a crew that can't save him
cuz even when u SS, the situation... well, the outlook still remains grim
Eh

I know where he stay, and I will creep in his home bro
so cred, u better sleep with one eye open like the CBS logo
Played

peep the predicts, u expected to be on top, but they evened the odds
that's why they only semisacred, cuz they know ur just shy of being da gawd
Sick

cue the vultures and flies, I see his jugular fine & I'm gonna stab him there
cuz could end every verse w/an Amen line faggot... u still wouldn't have a prayer
Wording cool. Punch was whatever.


found out i was fuckin ya girl n all she did was lie to u kid
u tried to blame the movies.. wen in reality shit REALLY got Rocky wen u cried like a bitch
Too wordy

u old as dust n work at a warehouse. throwin the hands? jus fuckin stop
the last time u squared up faggot.. was puttin boxes together at ur fuckin job
Terrible

fuck ur plug, u be coppin off ME cus i still supply green in a weed drought
ironically i'm a Made nigga n if u dnt pay.. bullets knock at ya door before i clean house
This cool

plus u n Bags bein close is jus gay. fag better have proof that says hes not
cus a single piece of evidence is One Eyed always see u Dread like Fetty Wap
Reaching

chopper knock ya head off right thru ya crib Des. dat scope got the best aim
wit my right to Behr arms.. i'll change the fuckin color of ur walls like fresh paint
Solid

If i didnt get a line fuck you suck a dick.

V cred

2-1 in quotes


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