Golden Linings Frozen Compliance

K Panda · 08-12-2015, 09:04 AM

Moonlight Sonata is prolly one of my favorite pieces to play on the piano, so I like your closing line. I think youre rhyme scheme and syllable control is impressive, but I think you started a lot better than you ended pattern wise. This was a dop read though, nice to see pieces where people have control over words and use them for their meaning and not just rhyming purpose.

Only question I have is why did you reference Operation Condor. I know of the operation, and I can't quite pin point how youre trying to use it.

08-12-2015, 09:04 AM	#3
K Panda Member Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 46 Rep Power: 0	Moonlight Sonata is prolly one of my favorite pieces to play on the piano, so I like your closing line. I think youre rhyme scheme and syllable control is impressive, but I think you started a lot better than you ended pattern wise. This was a dop read though, nice to see pieces where people have control over words and use them for their meaning and not just rhyming purpose. Only question I have is why did you reference Operation Condor. I know of the operation, and I can't quite pin point how youre trying to use it.