RND1. Lotto Smirk vs Chyeahhh!!! {Lotto Smirk wins}

Hush · 07-26-2015, 06:36 PM

Battle Arena Tournament

@Lotto Smirk @Chyeahhh!!!

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Hush · 07-26-2015, 09:49 PM

Lotto Smirk
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end
shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster
why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore
now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours
Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit
ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss
u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame
I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game

@Chyeahhh!!!

Chyeahhh!!! · 07-26-2015, 10:02 PM

You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent
If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it
Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season
This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason
Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick
Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it
ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed
I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick
And I give you Cred but that's enough dude
But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move

Flow · 07-27-2015, 01:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hush

Lotto Smirk
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end

Lol I liked this, concept feels fresh an a good personal

shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster

Hmmm this was weak

why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore
now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours

Lol this was funny shit, liked the wording here

Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit
ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss

Hmm nice attempt at a relevant concept but wording let it down and with that in mind the punch didn't land as well as it could

u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame
I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game

This was so so, not sure how I'm much I'm feeling this

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chyeahhh!!!

You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent
If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it

Hmmm weak, ok concept

Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season
This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason

Hahaha, this was good but the consent felt slightly forced, probs the lotb for me still

Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick
Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it

Hmmm there's not much wrong with this I just didn't feel it

ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed
I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick

Nice

And I give you Cred but that's enough dude
But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move

Meh

Good showing by both, very close battle, got to say it's been a while since I was here and when I was here last lotto was pretty weak and just starting out and this was a great showing so props how far you've come man, chyeeeh has always been a good writer though I only remember him for our swag and flow battles, you can see his wording is more polished...

I've got you both with about the same amount of punches landed, chyeeeh probably had it slightly better in wording but I felt lottos verse more so I'm going to have to vote lotto but this could go either way.

Lotto

fraze · 07-27-2015, 10:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hush

Lotto Smirk
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end
cool
shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster
nice flip
why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore
now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours
didn't set this up well to me
Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit
ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss
wording is off here
u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame
I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game
wording misses here also

@Chyeahhh!!!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chyeahhh!!!

You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent
If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it
nah. not feeling this
Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season
This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason
what? don't think you set this up well
Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick
Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it
ok.
ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed
I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick
not feeling it.
And I give you Cred but that's enough dude
But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move
i don't get the reference.

Lotto had a nice opening 2 bars then kinda trailed off. need to tighten up the wording. read the bars and make sure they flow smooth and direct the punch at your opponent in the harshest way you can think of. if your wording is bad it will kill a good concept and it can make you miss on stuff you shouldn't.

chyeeah... ive seen way better from you, not really feeling much in this verse. work on your concepts, cause a lot of them were just word association and simple references. try to make your flip as harsh as possible and use more word play, swagger, and wit to make it hit.

Smirk has this on quotes.

Vote: Lotto Smirk

Useless · 07-28-2015, 12:18 PM

Lottos verse was all jabs IMO. But the good thing is he had no misses until the closer, that closer was blah. I understand what u was trying but it was just bland. The rest of the verse was a good read tho.

Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season
This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason
----this was worded awkwardly but it still hit. Good line
ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed
I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick
----this was OK but kinda light

Ur opener n closer fell flat IMO...the closer was better but I didn't like the execution on either. The set up was OK n then blah.

I got lotto taking it on consistency

V. Lotto

Witty · 07-28-2015, 03:13 PM

bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end
Ok, cool, this kind of thing is used a lot on chyeahhh tho, but not bad
shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster
light and worded awkwardly, jab landed tho
why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore
now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours
Again, conspiracy lines have been done to death on chyeahhh so they have to be fire to really hit hard, this didn't tbh but again wasn't bad, just ok
Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit
ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss
Awkward wording but I liked this tbh
u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame
I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game
Nahhhh

vs

You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent
If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it
Eh, wasn't feeling tbh
Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season
This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason
This was cool, wording off tho
Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick
Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it
ok
ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed
I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick
This is my favourite line so far in this battle, cool.
And I give you Cred but that's enough dude
But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move
Lol I liked this too...light but funny.

Both had awkward wording, I really wish more rhymes were incorporated in to the verses, and not just at the end, and both had one big miss for me, Lotto's was his closer and Chyeahhh's was his opener, I think chyeahhh's jabs were more solid tho, so I'm going against the grain and giving him my vote. Neither verses sucked tho so could go either way.

Vote - Chyeahhh

8===D~~~~(}: · 07-28-2015, 03:25 PM

bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end
alright lol
shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster
haha alright
why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore
now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours
eh kinda played but ties in with personals so decent here
Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit
ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss
already seen a charged up line by cred lol but u dropped it first, ok here
u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame
I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game
wording killed the potential of this one

Contrà

You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent
If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it
ehh not feelin this
Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season
This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason
dope
Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick
Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it
again not feelin this yo
ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed
I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick
decent
And I give you Cred but that's enough dude
But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move
ehhh I don't get this tbh sorry

Chyeah had LOTB with the rape bar but other than that I didn't see anything that stood out for me. Lotto didn't really have any haymakers but he kept consistent with decent lines. I'm going with Lotto
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Kill Spree · 07-28-2015, 04:29 PM

Lotto Smirk
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end
cool personal, wording is choppy tho
shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster
ok
why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore
now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours
nah
Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit
ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss
not feeling this
u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame
I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game
played

You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent
If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it
cool concept, but this doesnt rhyme
Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season
This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason
cool.
Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick
Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it
not feelin this
ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed
I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick
...textcee lottery pick? not feeling this
And I give you Cred but that's enough dude
But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move
nah

overall - decent match, got them both with two hits each but i got lotto with better misses tbh. enough to edge the win

v/lotto

Ghost1 · 07-28-2015, 07:51 PM

bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end

Prolly. Statement not harsh enuff tho.

shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster

Lol aight

why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore
now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours

Lol ok

Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit
ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss

Eh didn't like the other one about this I just read an it was better then this

u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame
I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game

Shit was played wen the original came out over a decade.ago

You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent
If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it

Seen charm flips before...didn't really like wat u did with it either

Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season
This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason

Lol dope

Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick
Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it

Eh

ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed
I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick

Lol nice

And I give you Cred but that's enough dude
But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move

Lol eh

Could prolly say this about 2 punches landed a piece. Of them I thought chyeahhs were doper. Close one but I gotta rock w chyinny chyinny bang bang

V chyeaahhh

Unfukwitable · 07-29-2015, 12:38 AM

bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end
shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster

vs

Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick
Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it

Uh both had some cool ideas that couldve been worded better or flipped better overall but Im going with that one that had the harder hits here .. v/LottoSmirk

iSpaz · 07-29-2015, 02:14 AM

fuck yo, i had a full breakdown and accidentally hit the back button. basically both came with some ok jabs. nothing really stood out to me, just my opinion. i feel lotto had the better of misses.

v/lotto

Bust · 07-29-2015, 06:14 AM

Lotto

Opener was s lil light but ok
Disaster was cool
Conspiracy theory was iight
Charged up was worded poorly imo no impact
Closer is old

Vs chea

Seen alotta of 3rd times a charm/ lucky / leprechaun stuff , too played needed a fresher twist
Forced 16's was nice
Hallmark was to bland
Lottery pick was ooooooooook
Wasn't feelin combo breaker much

Iunno, I feel like lotto was more consistent throughout I mean cheyyyyyyya had a couple cool lines but the rest were either too played or not flipped harshly, lotto had the played metal gear but the rest somewhat hit so I gotta go lotto here.. Good read

Lotto

Mr. J · 07-29-2015, 03:44 PM

shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster
why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore
now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours
^^^
I felt like this was the strongest part of your verse..
the 'diss' punch felt awkwardly worded and threw me off a bit
that opening was ok, but it seemed too easy to come up with I think
that closer would have been nice had the punch landed harder
either way I thought this was a nice verse

Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season
This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason
Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick
Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it
ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed
I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick
^^^^^
I thought this whole section was flames
I wasn't really feeling that opener though, seemed off
other than that I thought this was a smooth verse
and that closer was pretty lulz worthy as well

v/I'm going to have to go with Chyeeaahhh on this one, his verse was fresh
as for Lotto he seemed more focused on stuff that has become obvious I feel
a lot of the lines I feel like I've seen before mayyyybe they had a fresh twist...
...but at the end of the day it seems like another verse I feel like I've read..
either way dope battle fella's

Hush · 07-31-2015, 01:35 PM

8-3 Lotto. Smirk Wins.

07-26-2015, 06:36 PM	#1
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	RND1. Lotto Smirk vs Chyeahhh!!! {Lotto Smirk wins} Battle Arena Tournament @Lotto Smirk @Chyeahhh!!! Rules Due Dates: Verses are due SUNDAY, August 2nd 2015 11:59 PM PST. Check Ins are due WEDNESDAY, July 11th 2014 Voting ends Friday July 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes. Line Limit: Min. = 10 lines Max. = 10 lines NO EXCEPTIONS General Rules: 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. Feeding = DQ. Recycling = DQ. Biting = DQ. No freeposting, swaying or bitching. Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will be disqualified. A check in IS mandatory. Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount. __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

07-26-2015, 09:49 PM	#2
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	Lotto Smirk bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game @Chyeahhh!!! __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

07-26-2015, 10:02 PM	#3
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,398 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663348	You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick And I give you Cred but that's enough dude But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

07-28-2015, 03:13 PM	#7
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,801 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 82986458	bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end Ok, cool, this kind of thing is used a lot on chyeahhh tho, but not bad shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster light and worded awkwardly, jab landed tho why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours Again, conspiracy lines have been done to death on chyeahhh so they have to be fire to really hit hard, this didn't tbh but again wasn't bad, just ok Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss Awkward wording but I liked this tbh u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game Nahhhh vs You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it Eh, wasn't feeling tbh Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason This was cool, wording off tho Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it ok ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick This is my favourite line so far in this battle, cool. And I give you Cred but that's enough dude But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move Lol I liked this too...light but funny. Both had awkward wording, I really wish more rhymes were incorporated in to the verses, and not just at the end, and both had one big miss for me, Lotto's was his closer and Chyeahhh's was his opener, I think chyeahhh's jabs were more solid tho, so I'm going against the grain and giving him my vote. Neither verses sucked tho so could go either way. Vote - Chyeahhh __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

07-29-2015, 12:38 AM	#11
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster vs Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it Uh both had some cool ideas that couldve been worded better or flipped better overall but Im going with that one that had the harder hits here .. v/LottoSmirk __________________ WICKeD

07-28-2015, 12:18 PM	#6
Useless 100% Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 1,803 Battle Record: 9-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 0	Lottos verse was all jabs IMO. But the good thing is he had no misses until the closer, that closer was blah. I understand what u was trying but it was just bland. The rest of the verse was a good read tho. Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason ----this was worded awkwardly but it still hit. Good line ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick ----this was OK but kinda light Ur opener n closer fell flat IMO...the closer was better but I didn't like the execution on either. The set up was OK n then blah. I got lotto taking it on consistency V. Lotto

07-28-2015, 03:25 PM	#8
8===D~~~~(}: Banned Join Date: Mar 2015 Posts: 1,335 Battle Record: 0-1000 Champed - Mustache C-C-Combo Breaker - No Man Cleft Behind (x79) - Clefts & Rights II - Grand Cleft Larceny - Cleft 4 Dead V Rep Power: 0	bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end alright lol shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster haha alright why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours eh kinda played but ties in with personals so decent here Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss already seen a charged up line by cred lol but u dropped it first, ok here u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game wording killed the potential of this one Contrà You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it ehh not feelin this Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason dope Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it again not feelin this yo ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick decent And I give you Cred but that's enough dude But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move ehhh I don't get this tbh sorry Chyeah had LOTB with the rape bar but other than that I didn't see anything that stood out for me. Lotto didn't really have any haymakers but he kept consistent with decent lines. I'm going with Lotto __________________

07-28-2015, 04:29 PM	#9
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,439 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	Lotto Smirk bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end cool personal, wording is choppy tho shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster ok why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours nah Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss not feeling this u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game played You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it cool concept, but this doesnt rhyme Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason cool. Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it not feelin this ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick ...textcee lottery pick? not feeling this And I give you Cred but that's enough dude But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move nah overall - decent match, got them both with two hits each but i got lotto with better misses tbh. enough to edge the win v/lotto

07-29-2015, 02:14 AM	#12
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161231	fuck yo, i had a full breakdown and accidentally hit the back button. basically both came with some ok jabs. nothing really stood out to me, just my opinion. i feel lotto had the better of misses. v/lotto __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

07-29-2015, 06:14 AM	#13
Bust Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 164 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 3710880	Lotto Opener was s lil light but ok Disaster was cool Conspiracy theory was iight Charged up was worded poorly imo no impact Closer is old Vs chea Seen alotta of 3rd times a charm/ lucky / leprechaun stuff , too played needed a fresher twist Forced 16's was nice Hallmark was to bland Lottery pick was ooooooooook Wasn't feelin combo breaker much Iunno, I feel like lotto was more consistent throughout I mean cheyyyyyyya had a couple cool lines but the rest were either too played or not flipped harshly, lotto had the played metal gear but the rest somewhat hit so I gotta go lotto here.. Good read Lotto

07-29-2015, 03:44 PM	#14
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,028 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours ^^^ I felt like this was the strongest part of your verse.. the 'diss' punch felt awkwardly worded and threw me off a bit that opening was ok, but it seemed too easy to come up with I think that closer would have been nice had the punch landed harder either way I thought this was a nice verse Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick ^^^^^ I thought this whole section was flames I wasn't really feeling that opener though, seemed off other than that I thought this was a smooth verse and that closer was pretty lulz worthy as well v/I'm going to have to go with Chyeeaahhh on this one, his verse was fresh as for Lotto he seemed more focused on stuff that has become obvious I feel a lot of the lines I feel like I've seen before mayyyybe they had a fresh twist... ...but at the end of the day it seems like another verse I feel like I've read.. either way dope battle fella's __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

07-31-2015, 01:35 PM	#15
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,042 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181417	8-3 Lotto. Smirk Wins. __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk