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RND1. Lotto Smirk vs Chyeahhh!!! {Lotto Smirk wins}
Battle Arena Tournament @Lotto Smirk @Chyeahhh!!! Rules Due Dates:
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Lotto Smirk
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game @Chyeahhh!!! |
You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent
If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick And I give you Cred but that's enough dude But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move |
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Good showing by both, very close battle, got to say it's been a while since I was here and when I was here last lotto was pretty weak and just starting out and this was a great showing so props how far you've come man, chyeeeh has always been a good writer though I only remember him for our swag and flow battles, you can see his wording is more polished... I've got you both with about the same amount of punches landed, chyeeeh probably had it slightly better in wording but I felt lottos verse more so I'm going to have to vote lotto but this could go either way. Lotto |
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chyeeah... ive seen way better from you, not really feeling much in this verse. work on your concepts, cause a lot of them were just word association and simple references. try to make your flip as harsh as possible and use more word play, swagger, and wit to make it hit. Smirk has this on quotes. Vote: Lotto Smirk |
Lottos verse was all jabs IMO. But the good thing is he had no misses until the closer, that closer was blah. I understand what u was trying but it was just bland. The rest of the verse was a good read tho.
Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason ----this was worded awkwardly but it still hit. Good line ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick ----this was OK but kinda light Ur opener n closer fell flat IMO...the closer was better but I didn't like the execution on either. The set up was OK n then blah. I got lotto taking it on consistency V. Lotto |
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end Ok, cool, this kind of thing is used a lot on chyeahhh tho, but not bad shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster light and worded awkwardly, jab landed tho why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours Again, conspiracy lines have been done to death on chyeahhh so they have to be fire to really hit hard, this didn't tbh but again wasn't bad, just ok Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss Awkward wording but I liked this tbh u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game Nahhhh vs You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it Eh, wasn't feeling tbh Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason This was cool, wording off tho Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it ok ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick This is my favourite line so far in this battle, cool. And I give you Cred but that's enough dude But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move Lol I liked this too...light but funny. Both had awkward wording, I really wish more rhymes were incorporated in to the verses, and not just at the end, and both had one big miss for me, Lotto's was his closer and Chyeahhh's was his opener, I think chyeahhh's jabs were more solid tho, so I'm going against the grain and giving him my vote. Neither verses sucked tho so could go either way. Vote - Chyeahhh |
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end alright lol shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster haha alright why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours eh kinda played but ties in with personals so decent here Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss already seen a charged up line by cred lol but u dropped it first, ok here u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game wording killed the potential of this one Contrà You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it ehh not feelin this Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason dope Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it again not feelin this yo ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick decent And I give you Cred but that's enough dude But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move ehhh I don't get this tbh sorry Chyeah had LOTB with the rape bar but other than that I didn't see anything that stood out for me. Lotto didn't really have any haymakers but he kept consistent with decent lines. I'm going with Lotto __________________ |
Lotto Smirk
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end cool personal, wording is choppy tho shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster ok why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours nah Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss not feeling this u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game played You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it cool concept, but this doesnt rhyme Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason cool. Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it not feelin this ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick ...textcee lottery pick? not feeling this And I give you Cred but that's enough dude But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move nah overall - decent match, got them both with two hits each but i got lotto with better misses tbh. enough to edge the win v/lotto |
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end Prolly. Statement not harsh enuff tho. shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster Lol aight why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours Lol ok Hush's mag got me hyped up, fire I'll spit why ur punches'll never hit ya verse ain't charged up, it'll be ok worded but no real bangers like that diss Eh didn't like the other one about this I just read an it was better then this u faker than anyone wi that tough talk,if you front I'll fire shots at u lame I'll give u that metal gear solid to the dome n I ain't even coppin that new game Shit was played wen the original came out over a decade.ago You're 0 for 2 against me, I'm wishing luck to my opponent If 3rd times the charm , for u, its in the bottom of a box with the leprechaun on it Seen charm flips before...didn't really like wat u did with it either Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason Lol dope Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it Eh ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick Lol nice And I give you Cred but that's enough dude But push my buttons and imma ccccombo breaker yah ass, that's my Attack of the Muff move Lol eh Could prolly say this about 2 punches landed a piece. Of them I thought chyeahhs were doper. Close one but I gotta rock w chyinny chyinny bang bang V chyeaahhh |
bore girls with ur theories that's why u'll always get stuck as a friend
if a girl EVER asks him for a date he'll just ramble on About when the world'll end shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster vs Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it Uh both had some cool ideas that couldve been worded better or flipped better overall but Im going with that one that had the harder hits here .. v/LottoSmirk |
fuck yo, i had a full breakdown and accidentally hit the back button. basically both came with some ok jabs. nothing really stood out to me, just my opinion. i feel lotto had the better of misses.
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Lotto
Opener was s lil light but ok Disaster was cool Conspiracy theory was iight Charged up was worded poorly imo no impact Closer is old Vs chea Seen alotta of 3rd times a charm/ lucky / leprechaun stuff , too played needed a fresher twist Forced 16's was nice Hallmark was to bland Lottery pick was ooooooooook Wasn't feelin combo breaker much Iunno, I feel like lotto was more consistent throughout I mean cheyyyyyyya had a couple cool lines but the rest were either too played or not flipped harshly, lotto had the played metal gear but the rest somewhat hit so I gotta go lotto here.. Good read Lotto |
shud spend money on clothes, instead of the predictions he ain't mastered
chyeahh threads about tsunami's, comets & EQ but the way he dressin is the real disaster why u was focusing on bullshit, I was straight fuckin ya silly whore now the TRUE conspiracy theory is that ur raising kids that ain't really yours ^^^ I felt like this was the strongest part of your verse.. the 'diss' punch felt awkwardly worded and threw me off a bit that opening was ok, but it seemed too easy to come up with I think that closer would have been nice had the punch landed harder either way I thought this was a nice verse Nice no show record! Be glad I came late in the season This con sent forced 16's and they all said no, guess they call it rape for a reason Yah wording always has suttin missing, switch up your gimmick Cuz reading your shit is like opening a hallmark card with no duckets in it ive heard of Lotto from 8 mile but Lotto Smirk? guys gotta be pissed I'd bet my balls he got that wack ass name from a textcee lottery pick ^^^^^ I thought this whole section was flames I wasn't really feeling that opener though, seemed off other than that I thought this was a smooth verse and that closer was pretty lulz worthy as well v/I'm going to have to go with Chyeeaahhh on this one, his verse was fresh as for Lotto he seemed more focused on stuff that has become obvious I feel a lot of the lines I feel like I've seen before mayyyybe they had a fresh twist... ...but at the end of the day it seems like another verse I feel like I've read.. either way dope battle fella's |
8-3 Lotto. Smirk Wins.
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