Havoc 0-1 vs Grandiloquent 0-0 - HAVOC WINS BY DQ

Sharp · 07-20-2015, 12:03 AM

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, July 23th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread

First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Havoc @Grandiloquent

Havoc · 07-20-2015, 12:24 AM

check, see you on THURSDAY

Grandiloquent · 07-20-2015, 07:52 AM

14 good with you?

Grandiloquent · 07-20-2015, 11:15 AM

Actually don't want you biting more lines then you need so I'll go ten....

Not surprised strikta said you went by the name alphabet
Fitting when you've bitten every letter that was ever said
Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch
Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit
Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth
But the way you ride vets dicks, a cunt is summin I should expect
I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone
You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home
You fat cus your daddy gave you a cookie every time he came inside you
It was havoc when he tried to ride you, ironically what your name implies to

Sharp · 07-21-2015, 05:14 PM

Forgot to mention Havoc is down 4 votes for not voting last week

this can be resolved by making votes/feed up before Thursday @Havoc

Havoc · 07-21-2015, 09:04 PM

pfffttttttt...

u bout that fisting life, the type of shit i think is sick & stupid..
but i bet his armageddon & it would be the end of his world if he didn't do it
i'm a damn smooth g, it's nothing for me to obliterate this whack groupie
so i'll push it to the limits cause this clown mimic's the one in that movie
damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it
cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic
my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy
if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby
u ride folks so hard it puts amen to shame & u've never had savage bars
this lame is always blowing smoke..you even have pic to prove it in ur avatar

blaow

Bash · 07-21-2015, 09:34 PM

Not surprised strikta said you went by the name alphabet
Fitting when you've bitten every letter that was ever said
-Not good. Not a clever or hard hitting insult
Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch
Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit
-came off bland, punch was EH
Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth
But the way you ride vets dicks, a cunt is summin I should expect
-same as above, try to reframe from using the same word twice unless there's a more creative twist
I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone
You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home
-Kinda funny
You fat cus your daddy gave you a cookie every time he came inside you
It was havoc when he tried to ride you, ironically what your name implies to
-nah

Vs

u bout that fisting life, the type of shit i think is sick & stupid..
but i bet his armageddon & it would be the end of his world if he didn't do it
-this could have been alil better, it was ight
i'm a damn smooth g, it's nothing for me to obliterate this whack groupie
so i'll push it to the limits cause this clown mimic's the one in that movie
-not too hard hitting
damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it
cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic
-cool
my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy
if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby
-lol nice
u ride folks so hard it puts amen to shame & u've never had savage bars
this lame is always blowing smoke..you even have pic to prove it in ur avatar
-bad closer

V/AlphaHavoc. Grand has an idea of battling but it came off as bland n wasn't creative. Havoc was more polished even w/ his verse being keyed.

2tripple0 · 07-22-2015, 09:55 AM

Aye I've got alpha taking this as well. His punches felt more coherent and I felt like his lines were stooge in general...as for grand I thought he was a bit generic and a bit boring at times. A lot of his lines felt statement like at times anyways my vote goes to

Alpha

Cred · 07-22-2015, 11:24 AM

Meh, bus money was ok i guess

vs

Grandstand & big baby

Big baby was lotb. Havoc shitted on the other dude here. Grad seems new. Ur verse seemed very generic. Read sum more battles bro n come harsher wit concepts.

Vote - Havoc

King Karaoke · 07-22-2015, 03:05 PM

Hi...

Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch
Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit
I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone
You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home

u had some cool ideas/concepts but they weren't executed well...
the sik line was your strongest...
bus money was weak but also funny for some reason...

damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it
cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic
my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy
if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby

grandstand was your best line...
bb line was cool but could've been better...
nice mix of lines of your verses...

I think Havoc's lines had more sting...

vote- Havoc...

Bye...

Kill Spree · 07-22-2015, 04:57 PM

Not surprised strikta said you went by the name alphabet
Fitting when you've bitten every letter that was ever said
weak
Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch
Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit
no
Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth
But the way you ride vets dicks, a cunt is summin I should expect
weak
I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone
You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home
lol,weak tho
You fat cus your daddy gave you a cookie every time he came inside you
It was havoc when he tried to ride you, ironically what your name implies to
light

Aker
u bout that fisting life, the type of shit i think is sick & stupid..
but i bet his armageddon & it would be the end of his world if he didn't do it
meh
i'm a damn smooth g, it's nothing for me to obliterate this whack groupie
so i'll push it to the limits cause this clown mimic's the one in that movie
no
damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it
cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic
cool
my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy
if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby
lol, light tho
u ride folks so hard it puts amen to shame & u've never had savage bars
this lame is always blowing smoke..you even have pic to prove it in ur avatar
wack

so gran was too generic here,had some played/light concepts, he needs some work for sure, AKER had a few nice lines some light, feel like ive seen the Armageddon shit before but thats his thing. he did enough to take this for sure

v/Hav

Lotto Smirk · 07-23-2015, 02:07 AM

Havoc got this I found bus money funny but it wasn't hard hitting and sik was ok but same again didn't really have that ouch behind it, overall grand had good ideas he just lacked in execution

Havoc I liked

Grandstand was lotb which took it for you but overall you was better I think a few of them we're ok but If you put time into them you could it made a few of them hit harder

Propa to both for showing stay up

Vote- havoc

Bust · 07-23-2015, 04:24 AM

Grand

Bus money was cool and closer was oooooooook, not much else hit well imo , cool concepts but execution lacked

Havoc

Grandstand was nice n gets in the ring was ok, the others weren't that harsh but I feel u had the better misses here to n edge this battle out

Havoc

Sn00p · 07-23-2015, 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grandiloquent

Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth

oh we biting e-cards/facebook pages/memes/reddit now? smh

http://www.someecards.com/usercards/...93195c6c34893b

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Id-ca...05622966154081

http://cheezburger.com/5905167104

https://www.reddit.com/r/AskReddit/c...sed_or/c4s8llo

Sn00p · 07-23-2015, 11:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grandiloquent

You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home

more facebook pages. lmaooo

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Youre...24053140958910

https://www.facebook.com/page118

IAmRhetoric · 07-23-2015, 11:25 AM

fuckin smh faggot

07-20-2015, 12:03 AM	#1
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	Havoc 0-1 vs Grandiloquent 0-0 - HAVOC WINS BY DQ Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday, July 23th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes @Havoc @Grandiloquent

07-21-2015, 09:04 PM	#6
Havoc 4orty 7even Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 72 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 0	pfffttttttt... u bout that fisting life, the type of shit i think is sick & stupid.. but i bet his armageddon & it would be the end of his world if he didn't do it i'm a damn smooth g, it's nothing for me to obliterate this whack groupie so i'll push it to the limits cause this clown mimic's the one in that movie damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby u ride folks so hard it puts amen to shame & u've never had savage bars this lame is always blowing smoke..you even have pic to prove it in ur avatar blaow __________________ Project Mayhem

07-22-2015, 09:55 AM	#8
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Aye I've got alpha taking this as well. His punches felt more coherent and I felt like his lines were stooge in general...as for grand I thought he was a bit generic and a bit boring at times. A lot of his lines felt statement like at times anyways my vote goes to Alpha __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

07-22-2015, 03:05 PM	#10
King Karaoke Stackin' wins... Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,515 Battle Record: 61-20 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - Survivor Tournament - Netcees Battle League (6x) - Netcees Gimmick Tournament Rep Power: 10353694	Hi... Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home u had some cool ideas/concepts but they weren't executed well... the sik line was your strongest... bus money was weak but also funny for some reason... damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby grandstand was your best line... bb line was cool but could've been better... nice mix of lines of your verses... I think Havoc's lines had more sting... vote- Havoc... Bye... __________________ the Outsiders Orc \| ill nik-A \| Sn00p \| King Karaoke

07-20-2015, 12:24 AM	#2
Havoc 4orty 7even Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 72 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 0	check, see you on THURSDAY

07-20-2015, 07:52 AM	#3
Grandiloquent Custom User Title Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: The shire Posts: 13 Accomplishments - loves facebook lines Champed - Biter in 2015 Rep Power: 0	14 good with you?

07-20-2015, 11:15 AM	#4
Grandiloquent Custom User Title Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: The shire Posts: 13 Accomplishments - loves facebook lines Champed - Biter in 2015 Rep Power: 0	Actually don't want you biting more lines then you need so I'll go ten.... Not surprised strikta said you went by the name alphabet Fitting when you've bitten every letter that was ever said Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth But the way you ride vets dicks, a cunt is summin I should expect I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home You fat cus your daddy gave you a cookie every time he came inside you It was havoc when he tried to ride you, ironically what your name implies to

07-21-2015, 05:14 PM	#5
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	Forgot to mention Havoc is down 4 votes for not voting last week this can be resolved by making votes/feed up before Thursday @Havoc

07-21-2015, 09:34 PM	#7
Bash Barrin' Out Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 577 Battle Record: 16-15 Champed - Fight Night 5 Rep Power: 13649168	Not surprised strikta said you went by the name alphabet Fitting when you've bitten every letter that was ever said -Not good. Not a clever or hard hitting insult Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit -came off bland, punch was EH Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth But the way you ride vets dicks, a cunt is summin I should expect -same as above, try to reframe from using the same word twice unless there's a more creative twist I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home -Kinda funny You fat cus your daddy gave you a cookie every time he came inside you It was havoc when he tried to ride you, ironically what your name implies to -nah Vs u bout that fisting life, the type of shit i think is sick & stupid.. but i bet his armageddon & it would be the end of his world if he didn't do it -this could have been alil better, it was ight i'm a damn smooth g, it's nothing for me to obliterate this whack groupie so i'll push it to the limits cause this clown mimic's the one in that movie -not too hard hitting damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic -cool my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby -lol nice u ride folks so hard it puts amen to shame & u've never had savage bars this lame is always blowing smoke..you even have pic to prove it in ur avatar -bad closer V/AlphaHavoc. Grand has an idea of battling but it came off as bland n wasn't creative. Havoc was more polished even w/ his verse being keyed.

07-22-2015, 11:24 AM	#9
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Meh, bus money was ok i guess vs Grandstand & big baby Big baby was lotb. Havoc shitted on the other dude here. Grad seems new. Ur verse seemed very generic. Read sum more battles bro n come harsher wit concepts. Vote - Havoc

07-22-2015, 04:57 PM	#11
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,439 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645695	Not surprised strikta said you went by the name alphabet Fitting when you've bitten every letter that was ever said weak Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit no Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth But the way you ride vets dicks, a cunt is summin I should expect weak I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home lol,weak tho You fat cus your daddy gave you a cookie every time he came inside you It was havoc when he tried to ride you, ironically what your name implies to light Aker u bout that fisting life, the type of shit i think is sick & stupid.. but i bet his armageddon & it would be the end of his world if he didn't do it meh i'm a damn smooth g, it's nothing for me to obliterate this whack groupie so i'll push it to the limits cause this clown mimic's the one in that movie no damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic cool my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby lol, light tho u ride folks so hard it puts amen to shame & u've never had savage bars this lame is always blowing smoke..you even have pic to prove it in ur avatar wack so gran was too generic here,had some played/light concepts, he needs some work for sure, AKER had a few nice lines some light, feel like ive seen the Armageddon shit before but thats his thing. he did enough to take this for sure v/Hav

07-23-2015, 02:07 AM	#12
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665830	Havoc got this I found bus money funny but it wasn't hard hitting and sik was ok but same again didn't really have that ouch behind it, overall grand had good ideas he just lacked in execution Havoc I liked Grandstand was lotb which took it for you but overall you was better I think a few of them we're ok but If you put time into them you could it made a few of them hit harder Propa to both for showing stay up Vote- havoc

07-23-2015, 04:24 AM	#13
Bust Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 164 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 3710880	Grand Bus money was cool and closer was oooooooook, not much else hit well imo , cool concepts but execution lacked Havoc Grandstand was nice n gets in the ring was ok, the others weren't that harsh but I feel u had the better misses here to n edge this battle out Havoc