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Sharp 07-20-2015 12:03 AM

Havoc 0-1 vs Grandiloquent 0-0 - HAVOC WINS BY DQ
 
Netcees Battle League Season VIII


Rules

Due Dates:
  • Verses are due Thursday, July 23th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
  • Battles that lack votes may close later.
  • One sided battles may get closed early.
  • Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
  • Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
  • If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Havoc @Grandiloquent

Havoc 07-20-2015 12:24 AM

check, see you on THURSDAY

Grandiloquent 07-20-2015 07:52 AM

14 good with you?

Grandiloquent 07-20-2015 11:15 AM

Actually don't want you biting more lines then you need so I'll go ten....

Not surprised strikta said you went by the name alphabet
Fitting when you've bitten every letter that was ever said
Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch
Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit
Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth
But the way you ride vets dicks, a cunt is summin I should expect
I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone
You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home
You fat cus your daddy gave you a cookie every time he came inside you
It was havoc when he tried to ride you, ironically what your name implies to

Sharp 07-21-2015 05:14 PM

Forgot to mention Havoc is down 4 votes for not voting last week

this can be resolved by making votes/feed up before Thursday @Havoc

Havoc 07-21-2015 09:04 PM

pfffttttttt...


u bout that fisting life, the type of shit i think is sick & stupid..
but i bet his armageddon & it would be the end of his world if he didn't do it
i'm a damn smooth g, it's nothing for me to obliterate this whack groupie
so i'll push it to the limits cause this clown mimic's the one in that movie
damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it
cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic
my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy
if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby
u ride folks so hard it puts amen to shame & u've never had savage bars
this lame is always blowing smoke..you even have pic to prove it in ur avatar


blaow

Bash 07-21-2015 09:34 PM

Not surprised strikta said you went by the name alphabet
Fitting when you've bitten every letter that was ever said
-Not good. Not a clever or hard hitting insult
Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch
Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit
-came off bland, punch was EH
Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth
But the way you ride vets dicks, a cunt is summin I should expect
-same as above, try to reframe from using the same word twice unless there's a more creative twist
I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone
You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home
-Kinda funny
You fat cus your daddy gave you a cookie every time he came inside you
It was havoc when he tried to ride you, ironically what your name implies to
-nah

Vs

u bout that fisting life, the type of shit i think is sick & stupid..
but i bet his armageddon & it would be the end of his world if he didn't do it
-this could have been alil better, it was ight
i'm a damn smooth g, it's nothing for me to obliterate this whack groupie
so i'll push it to the limits cause this clown mimic's the one in that movie
-not too hard hitting
damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it
cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic
-cool
my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy
if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby
-lol nice
u ride folks so hard it puts amen to shame & u've never had savage bars
this lame is always blowing smoke..you even have pic to prove it in ur avatar
-bad closer

V/AlphaHavoc. Grand has an idea of battling but it came off as bland n wasn't creative. Havoc was more polished even w/ his verse being keyed.

2tripple0 07-22-2015 09:55 AM

Aye I've got alpha taking this as well. His punches felt more coherent and I felt like his lines were stooge in general...as for grand I thought he was a bit generic and a bit boring at times. A lot of his lines felt statement like at times anyways my vote goes to


Alpha

Cred 07-22-2015 11:24 AM

Meh, bus money was ok i guess

vs

Grandstand & big baby

Big baby was lotb. Havoc shitted on the other dude here. Grad seems new. Ur verse seemed very generic. Read sum more battles bro n come harsher wit concepts.

Vote - Havoc

King Karaoke 07-22-2015 03:05 PM

Hi...

Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch
Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit
I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone
You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home

u had some cool ideas/concepts but they weren't executed well...
the sik line was your strongest...
bus money was weak but also funny for some reason...


damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it
cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic
my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy
if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby

grandstand was your best line...
bb line was cool but could've been better...
nice mix of lines of your verses...

I think Havoc's lines had more sting...

vote- Havoc...

Bye...

Kill Spree 07-22-2015 04:57 PM

Not surprised strikta said you went by the name alphabet
Fitting when you've bitten every letter that was ever said
weak
Dead on arrival, well that's no surprise you whack bitch
Expected your "sik" verse to be him ghost writin that shit
no
Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth
But the way you ride vets dicks, a cunt is summin I should expect
weak
I pay a couple bone a month on taxis, feet never touch the stone
You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home
lol,weak tho
You fat cus your daddy gave you a cookie every time he came inside you
It was havoc when he tried to ride you, ironically what your name implies to
light



Aker
u bout that fisting life, the type of shit i think is sick & stupid..
but i bet his armageddon & it would be the end of his world if he didn't do it
meh
i'm a damn smooth g, it's nothing for me to obliterate this whack groupie
so i'll push it to the limits cause this clown mimic's the one in that movie
no
damn noobies, no one's givin this lame applause & we oughta believe it
cus if i ever see grandstand i'll toss em off one to make him a quadriplegic
cool
my right snipes when it lands i'm nice w/ the hands, in the ring my fists crazy
if this faggot gets in the ring he is trying to put his dick on the lips of big baby
lol, light tho
u ride folks so hard it puts amen to shame & u've never had savage bars
this lame is always blowing smoke..you even have pic to prove it in ur avatar
wack



so gran was too generic here,had some played/light concepts, he needs some work for sure, AKER had a few nice lines some light, feel like ive seen the Armageddon shit before but thats his thing. he did enough to take this for sure

v/Hav

Lotto Smirk 07-23-2015 02:07 AM

Havoc got this I found bus money funny but it wasn't hard hitting and sik was ok but same again didn't really have that ouch behind it, overall grand had good ideas he just lacked in execution

Havoc I liked

Grandstand was lotb which took it for you but overall you was better I think a few of them we're ok but If you put time into them you could it made a few of them hit harder

Propa to both for showing stay up

Vote- havoc

Bust 07-23-2015 04:24 AM

Grand

Bus money was cool and closer was oooooooook, not much else hit well imo , cool concepts but execution lacked


Havoc

Grandstand was nice n gets in the ring was ok, the others weren't that harsh but I feel u had the better misses here to n edge this battle out


Havoc

Sn00p 07-23-2015 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grandiloquent (Post 508417)
Want to call you a cunt, but you lack the warmth & depth

oh we biting e-cards/facebook pages/memes/reddit now? smh

http://www.someecards.com/usercards/...93195c6c34893b

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Id-ca...05622966154081

http://cheezburger.com/5905167104

https://www.reddit.com/r/AskReddit/c...sed_or/c4s8llo

Sn00p 07-23-2015 11:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grandiloquent (Post 508417)
You be suckin cock for bus money... Then still walk fucking home

more facebook pages. lmaooo

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Youre...24053140958910

https://www.facebook.com/page118

IAmRhetoric 07-23-2015 11:25 AM

fuckin smh faggot


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