fraze 7-4 vs Odd Ways 2-1 - ODD WINS

Yppih · 07-22-2015, 07:14 PM

Fraze

Bar1-Concept had a cool twist I liked. 3/5
Bar2-Felt like wording could've been better. 2.5/5
Bar3-Nah wasn't feelin. 1/5
Bar4-Cool punch, got too wordy 2.5/5
Bar5-I liked the Piccolo play. Again still felt wording could've made this hit harder 3/5.
Bar6-Ehh wasn't the biggest fan of this. 2/5

Overall- 14/30

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Odd

Bar1-Cool thought it had a pop 3/5
Bar2-Yeah I lol'd 3/5
Bar3-Again I liked this. 3/5
Bar4-Was cool. 2.5/5
Bar5-Was cool again. 2.5/5
Bar6-Rhyming in the end didn't end off the sweetest. Thought the concept was cool though. 2.75/5

Overall- 16.75/30

Both came pretty solid, but I favored Odd's concepts a bit more.

07-22-2015, 07:14 PM	#11
Yppih Clips.....Ammo Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 126 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 2318590	Fraze Bar1-Concept had a cool twist I liked. 3/5 Bar2-Felt like wording could've been better. 2.5/5 Bar3-Nah wasn't feelin. 1/5 Bar4-Cool punch, got too wordy 2.5/5 Bar5-I liked the Piccolo play. Again still felt wording could've made this hit harder 3/5. Bar6-Ehh wasn't the biggest fan of this. 2/5 Overall- 14/30 ---- Odd Bar1-Cool thought it had a pop 3/5 Bar2-Yeah I lol'd 3/5 Bar3-Again I liked this. 3/5 Bar4-Was cool. 2.5/5 Bar5-Was cool again. 2.5/5 Bar6-Rhyming in the end didn't end off the sweetest. Thought the concept was cool though. 2.75/5 Overall- 16.75/30 Both came pretty solid, but I favored Odd's concepts a bit more. __________________ I don't be trustin these hoes, I just be smashing these hoes...-#RULEnumeroUno